Comments: 17
ruca-breathe [2007-06-23 23:19:05 +0000 UTC]
beautiful.
WHERES ME?!?!?!?!
just kidding.
:]
i love you.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
AshThaDreemr In reply to ruca-breathe [2007-06-23 23:22:38 +0000 UTC]
thankkkkkkk you :]
haha
omg, i hate that fag.
:[
[ex]
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
DarthVargi [2005-05-30 02:00:26 +0000 UTC]
This poem is quite impressive and obviously a lot of thought and feelings went into the composition of it. I would be very proud of this piece. Well done!
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
AshThaDreemr In reply to DarthVargi [2005-05-30 18:34:37 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much. Yes, I'm proud of it. It's very personal.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
TheonlyDON [2005-05-30 00:52:52 +0000 UTC]
omg after reading your poem i had to go have a smoke
deep... very deep i just started writing poems and i have so much pain and confusion that i can't explain but i could never lay one down towards my family like the way you did i can write and write about insights on life but when it comes down to writing out my feelings towards family i draw a blank and can't think. im 18 years old from thornhill ont. and i feel like im 20 somthing locked down in a nothing town read my poem Eyes Open and let me know what you think i know there is huge grammer issues but let me know what you think
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
AshThaDreemr In reply to TheonlyDON [2005-05-30 00:55:45 +0000 UTC]
Thank so much.
Wow.
Okay, I'll go read it now.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
unseen-soul [2005-05-29 20:34:01 +0000 UTC]
thats a greta poem really deep im going to fav ok
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Citrus007 [2005-05-29 06:55:14 +0000 UTC]
Wow this is woderful. I don't really know what to say
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
AshThaDreemr In reply to Citrus007 [2005-05-29 07:05:19 +0000 UTC]
Thank you.
And I'll never forget her
She's an inspiration
My love of writing has grown
From reading her creations
There's a stanza I'll add.
That ones about you.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0