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AshThaDreemr — When I'm Alone
Published: 2005-05-29 06:51:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 218; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 3
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Description Alone in my room
And no one is there
I turn on a slow song
And let down my hair

I curl in my blanket
And let the memories rush
My mind overloads
And my cheeks flush

I remember the times worth remembering
And people I've cared for
I wonder if I cross their minds
Or if they've closed the door

I pour out my heart with these tears
And my light begins to dim
There's all these people I've known forever
And I still have room for him

There's not to many memories
It was only two months that he cared
But I still care and always will
Even though there was little time we shared

In an instant my heart made room for her
And I know she'll always be there
Forever my shoulder to lean on
But her secret's hard to bare

To another friend who's heaven sent
This isn't the end of the line
No distance can tear us apart
My sorrows are hers and hers are mine

And I'll never forget her
She's an inspiration
My love of writing has grown
From reading her creations

And no matter how loud he is
I cherish my brother too
I pray no harm to come to him
Without him I don't know what I'd do

And I cry when I think about the apologies I owe
To an important woman in my life
Who has always been there for me
Through all my sorrows and my strfie

When I'm alone
I think about all of this
I cry and remember
All the sorrow and all of the bliss

But when Mama comes home
I dry the tears and cry on the inside
Because I'm trying to imagine
What I'd do without her by my side
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Comments: 17

ruca-breathe [2007-06-23 23:45:55 +0000 UTC]

what an ass i know.
but your the better person you know.
!

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AshThaDreemr In reply to ruca-breathe [2007-06-23 23:52:24 +0000 UTC]

LOL
Why thanks.



(heyy press reply and it will show up underneath next timeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee)

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ruca-breathe [2007-06-23 23:19:05 +0000 UTC]

beautiful.
WHERES ME?!?!?!?!
just kidding.
:]
i love you.

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AshThaDreemr In reply to ruca-breathe [2007-06-23 23:22:38 +0000 UTC]

thankkkkkkk you :]
haha


omg, i hate that fag.
:[

[ex]

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DarthVargi [2005-05-30 02:00:26 +0000 UTC]

This poem is quite impressive and obviously a lot of thought and feelings went into the composition of it. I would be very proud of this piece. Well done!

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AshThaDreemr In reply to DarthVargi [2005-05-30 18:34:37 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much. Yes, I'm proud of it. It's very personal.

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TheonlyDON [2005-05-30 00:52:52 +0000 UTC]

omg after reading your poem i had to go have a smoke
deep... very deep i just started writing poems and i have so much pain and confusion that i can't explain but i could never lay one down towards my family like the way you did i can write and write about insights on life but when it comes down to writing out my feelings towards family i draw a blank and can't think. im 18 years old from thornhill ont. and i feel like im 20 somthing locked down in a nothing town read my poem Eyes Open and let me know what you think i know there is huge grammer issues but let me know what you think

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AshThaDreemr In reply to TheonlyDON [2005-05-30 00:55:45 +0000 UTC]

Thank so much.
Wow.
Okay, I'll go read it now.

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unseen-soul [2005-05-29 20:34:01 +0000 UTC]

thats a greta poem really deep im going to fav ok

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AshThaDreemr In reply to unseen-soul [2005-05-30 00:49:12 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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csbSk8erChik [2005-05-29 18:30:34 +0000 UTC]

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AshThaDreemr In reply to csbSk8erChik [2005-05-30 00:46:08 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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Pokeaholic [2005-05-29 12:29:06 +0000 UTC]

wow so beautiful.
hope u dont mind me saying cheeks is mis-spelt
keep it up, u write well

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AshThaDreemr In reply to Pokeaholic [2005-05-30 00:35:59 +0000 UTC]

oh.
it is? I'll fix that. thanks.

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Pokeaholic In reply to AshThaDreemr [2005-05-30 10:08:10 +0000 UTC]

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Citrus007 [2005-05-29 06:55:14 +0000 UTC]

Wow this is woderful. I don't really know what to say

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AshThaDreemr In reply to Citrus007 [2005-05-29 07:05:19 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

And I'll never forget her
She's an inspiration
My love of writing has grown
From reading her creations

There's a stanza I'll add.
That ones about you.

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