Comments: 27
kadenfukuyama [2007-09-09 03:52:56 +0000 UTC]
amazingly stunning
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Farfalla-Dea [2005-09-12 12:15:44 +0000 UTC]
The eyes are particularly creepy and engaging... just wow.
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angeldiva [2005-09-06 04:33:03 +0000 UTC]
OMG!! Absolutely gorgeous!
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Buffy-fan [2005-08-26 03:30:07 +0000 UTC]
wow that is gorgeous, nicely done!
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erythromycin [2005-08-25 04:09:22 +0000 UTC]
Alright I'll take a moment here and drop my 2 cents on this, even though it'll probably be pointless cuz everyone has already given you such wonderful praise. But..whatev!
For starters I think not doing her in the typical blue motif was a very bold move and I find that really cool that you were willing to try something different or experiment with different effects. I think alot of artists get stuck within a certain set of parematers(sp?) and they are afraid to go beyond the norm of what they typically do. Yet in a sense it's as if you brought her out of her norm style and put her in your's or pencil life drawing or portraits. So I dunno if my praise for trying something new...really applies to you. Either way it's still cool and you pulled it off well.
As far as the actual work, I think the hair looks wonderful and the shading was done well in that section. Of course J and her shading...as if it's ever really bad, but seriously the best that you did it on was actually the face. The facial structures you made for her were strikingly subtle, and that is so kick ass yo! good job girl
Can't really say much about her clothes as you don't have alot of area on the canvas, and the BG is empty with a solid black palette...kinda boring but we all know this is a spotlight effect so it's acceptable in this example ONLY. The lips are gorgeous though, and the texture you added there is amazing, I'd make out with this chick^^. * runs n' hides * < holy shit!
There really is only one thing about this that I'd change. HER left eye, the pupil. The colored sections are fine, but the black in the middle is not equal on both sides. N' yes I understand she's at an angle, but still I can tell it's off. It's just not the right size...IMO!! You might disagree, but the left one looks just a scoche smaller. You'd have to stare at her to notice that though, but then again she is some fucked up chick by your description so if that is the way her eyes are supposed to be...one smaller than the other, than fine.
Overall great work girl,
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Ashtoreth In reply to erythromycin [2005-08-25 08:15:37 +0000 UTC]
Patrick you always focus on the smallest details >_< lmao To be honest I paid the pupil no attention and just threw it in!!
Yeah I dunno if I went against the norm cause I always draw them without colour, lol. I don't know if I even could, maybe cause I am too lazy. Same for the background, I couldn't be buggered, so I just threw the black in there to fit up the ugly white space.
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erythromycin In reply to Ashtoreth [2005-08-25 13:03:36 +0000 UTC]
Well I'm sorry if you object to my critique, or if you're offended by it. I don't think I focus on the smallest details, I tend to believe that I look at the big picture in things. Therefore on a piece of art like this, it's not that I'm focusing on but one simple thing, but I see everything. It's not like I said it's fucking horrid or something, but the eye is noticeable. I believe you that you didn't pay any attention, you've done this same thing before I'm pretty sure. Like I said it's good work, and the black was for the highlight I understand that, I'd just modify the pupil if it was me.
It's ironic the first art I ever seen of yours there was a colored chibi style character, unless I have you confused with someone else, which I'm sure I don't. N' it seemed aside from that and a few pieces here or there you don't do color much. That's ok, it's no big deal either way. I agree with other's assesment on this that it's cool you didn't do it in color like it's been done that way so many times before.
I have to get ready for work, peace out
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Ashtoreth In reply to erythromycin [2005-08-25 13:21:04 +0000 UTC]
uhhh...I'm not offended 0.o I was just stating. I didn't even notice that until you brought it up which says that you look even closer than I do thats all.
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Katerina-Art [2005-08-19 19:06:15 +0000 UTC]
very good portrait i really like her look in her eyes she look like she is looking into-very good!!
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gdpr-1691821 [2005-08-19 07:13:50 +0000 UTC]
niiice.
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