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SoftcloudRC [2012-11-18 02:03:45 +0000 UTC]
Shadepaw looked up at her mentor. "Are you scared? Scared about the wolves?" Shadepaw shuddered, picturing her mentor being shaken in the jaws of a ferocious wolf. Those things were deadly, but for Shadepaw to prove herself worthy, she mustn't show fear. Shadepaw looked back at Fallowheart. "If we have full bellies, we can kill the wolf easily!" Shadepaw yowled at her mentor, then raced off to camp, hopeing to get some fresh-kill.
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Ask-FlameTail In reply to SoftcloudRC [2012-11-21 04:17:27 +0000 UTC]
Fallowheart hesitated in the clearing, letting Shadepaw's words sink in. They were utterly naive. She admired her apprentice's spirit, but reality was very harsh.
Shaking her head bitterly, Fallowheart raced after the apprentice, the wind stinging her eyes.
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SoftcloudRC In reply to Ask-FlameTail [2012-11-21 15:17:27 +0000 UTC]
Shadepaw wondered if Fallowheart had heard her. As Shadepaw padded into camp, she saw barely any food in the fresh-kill pile. It was barely sunhigh, the hunting patrol is probably out, and Shadepaw's patrol was probably gonna leave soon.
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Ask-FlameTail In reply to SoftcloudRC [2012-11-21 20:16:23 +0000 UTC]
Fallowheart slowed her pace after entering the the camp, and proceeded into a stalk. She crept up on the glum apprentice in hopes to brighten her mood. "Boo!" She exclaimed.
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SoftcloudRC In reply to Ask-FlameTail [2012-11-21 20:23:35 +0000 UTC]
"Eep!" Shadepaw jumped, startled. She spun around to see Fallowheart, stalking Shadepaw. Shadepaw sat down and laughed. "Fallowheart, I thought you were a badger for a second!"
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Ask-FlameTail In reply to SoftcloudRC [2012-11-21 20:33:06 +0000 UTC]
Fallowheart puffed out her fur, and with fake offense, "You think a badger could pull off fur this nice?"
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SoftcloudRC In reply to Ask-FlameTail [2012-11-21 20:47:00 +0000 UTC]
Shadepaw laughed and batted at the fur. Sarcastically, she retorted "They wouldn't be able to pull off that fur because its solid rock!"
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Ask-FlameTail In reply to SoftcloudRC [2012-11-21 21:51:41 +0000 UTC]
"Hmpf, I'm hurt." Fallowheart teased. "I worked so hard on it too. Woke up and gave it one good shake."
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SoftcloudRC In reply to Ask-FlameTail [2012-11-21 21:57:45 +0000 UTC]
Shadepaw laughed and remarked sarcastically, "No! Don't shake it! It'll cause and earthquake!"
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Ask-Applefur [2012-11-17 21:56:08 +0000 UTC]
Aw this is cute! I like doing warrior OC stories too
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GeneralPanic [2012-11-15 07:09:38 +0000 UTC]
I love how you draw cats :'D
Your lineart is just so clean, I love it~!
Also, I like your writing part!!
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Ask-FlameTail In reply to GeneralPanic [2012-11-15 19:12:56 +0000 UTC]
Really now? I don't like my lines that much. They're too clean and connected I think.
psssh my writing is...strange... you really are an odd one to like it
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Ask-FlameTail In reply to GeneralPanic [2012-11-16 22:40:14 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, I suppose
I just do not think it is any good, so it strikes me funny when people i enjoy it
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Nixhil [2012-11-15 06:36:28 +0000 UTC]
I really like this piece!!! super awesome!
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