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weezy815 [2013-05-22 22:41:15 +0000 UTC]
"If she ever kisses you, I'll turn you into a prince."
"You will?"
"Prince of the land of stench!"
Totally didn't see that part coming. It's great!
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wowgypsy [2009-12-22 21:56:54 +0000 UTC]
(From Shadowcat) this is setting up to be quite intresting, just have to nitpick (sorry) Jadia's eyes are ment to be just like Jareth's right? Jareth/David Bowey has walleye, one eye is a bright blue, the other a dark brown. I loved your mention of the Worm, he is great. Loveing this story so far, keep it up!
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AsryaKino In reply to wowgypsy [2009-12-23 01:14:58 +0000 UTC]
Actually, Jadia's eyes change colour. They're like Jareth/Bowies only in shades of brown and blue. As she turns more into what she's becoming they turn more mundane. Originally her eyes were supposed to be Bright icy blue with brown hair styled like Jareth's... Unfortunately I really really need to go back and rewrite the whole thing.
I appreciate it though. I think I did mess up somewhere in my storytelling...
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wowgypsy In reply to AsryaKino [2009-12-23 17:30:45 +0000 UTC]
(From Shadowcat) Glad thats cleared up, and I don't count it as a mess up, more like a minor mistake, we can't all be as perfict Jareth! haha
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AsryaKino In reply to wowgypsy [2009-12-24 06:00:26 +0000 UTC]
*sigh* No.. but I could wish...
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wowgypsy In reply to AsryaKino [2009-12-24 13:19:53 +0000 UTC]
hay, wishes sometimes come true!
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LaVern [2008-08-08 01:10:50 +0000 UTC]
the ugliette is actually the ubliette ^_^
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AsryaKino In reply to Memory-Of-Lakaeos [2007-07-28 00:44:14 +0000 UTC]
Can't wait huh? Then take a look at the next part I just posted!
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