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AssassinJ2 — Punk Marilyn 2
Published: 2014-05-14 01:47:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 226; Favourites: 7; Downloads: 0
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If you don't recognize this song, you are probably musically uneducated.Related content
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And you must be artistically uneducated. But I will point out some little things for you!
First, what happend to his right arm? I can just see a sleeve, but there clearly isn't an arm in this sleeve-tube thing. Try adding a hand, or some fingers maybe.
Second, where is he standing? You forgot to add any scenery so I'm guessing that he is leaning against a wall, due to the little shade behind his back. But where is this wall? You confront the viewer with a illogical conundrum, which is further increased by the fact that his hair is still cleary sticking out behind his back.
I do feel the need to compliment the no-nonse composition you have committed yourself to. It is brave, and holds out against the current ideas and artistic rules set by contemporary artists. It is very Avant Garde.
However don't be afraid to add some element to enhance this formidable choice!
Critic out!
Peace
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