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Blue-Star10 [2012-12-13 05:35:09 +0000 UTC]

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Adorable!~

I love the shading and coloring! Its all so beautiful! c: The colors mix so well.

The impact is amazing, the hair and eyes stood out the most to me. The lines are smooth too! The shading of the hair is amazing but the highlights may be a little too bright. And the shines of the eyes well sorted!~

The skin shading is great as well. c: The nose, smile, and blush are done well! And I like the little shine on her left cheek. :3

Her clothes, ribbons, and necklace are cute! >w<
And well shaded. It might help to shade under the necklace. The left shoulder is a small looking. If you did the clothes from the anime and manga, her clothes/shoulder are puffy in that area. ^^

Over all it is beautiful! Better than any of my drawings! a.deviantart.net/avatars/l/o/l… " alt=" " title="loveloveplz" />

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idea-gal [2012-12-13 03:34:27 +0000 UTC]

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Firstly, this is fabulous. It's like my fave out of all your artworks.
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Now here comes the critique.
LOL.
1. The highlights of her hair is a bit too bright and too much. If the lamp was shining on her head THEN it would be okay.
2. The ribbons are nice, with the light shines and shadows. Same for the neck part.
3. The eyes are wonderful. The perf amount of shading and gradient, without a hint of mistake. And the eye shines are in the right place.
4. The nose and mouth are nice.
5. Um, the necklace is a bit weird cuz it seems to be floating slightly.
6. Correct proportions
7. the visible shoulder is a BIT weird.
Kay done.

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KUMALICIOUS [2012-12-12 13:04:11 +0000 UTC]

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This is very cute! I like the pose very much! Her face is very nice and cute her neck is nice but, the body seems a little to big, her shoulders look sorta wide and then you have small arms, and then the chest. If the arms were a bit, just a tiny bit wider it would work. the hair flows nicely, her eyes are really eye-catching. (LOL) Very nice job, it's hust the arms don't correspond with the shoulders very well. The shading is amazing! I can't shade very well at all... Very awesome peice of art! You did great!

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lojanz [2012-12-13 19:38:11 +0000 UTC]

I do like it :3

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ItsNotFilia [2012-12-13 08:12:53 +0000 UTC]

Apart from what had been mentioned, her eyes feel somewhat odd; the lashes appear to extend in different directions.

About practicin' shoulders and whatnot, I found real life reference to be quite helpful, especially if you benefit from a mirror. Well, any reference that's reasonably realistic, that is.

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brideofFlamePrince [2012-12-13 05:54:07 +0000 UTC]

OMG !! SHE'S SO BEAUTIFUL !!!! xDDDDDDDDDDD

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Celinerr [2012-12-13 01:38:15 +0000 UTC]

So coool~! *^*

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takeiteasy-brother [2012-12-12 22:55:37 +0000 UTC]

i love the shading on this one>w< very nice job^w^

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NecroCC [2012-12-12 15:38:58 +0000 UTC]

very pretty nn

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mauveamygirl [2012-12-12 14:14:00 +0000 UTC]

oh my gosh this is super cute!

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