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Published: 2016-12-27 10:03:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 1548; Favourites: 191; Downloads: 1
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I'm coming for you Jesus
On a side note, I keep changing my colouring style. I'm liking the brush tool so far.
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Fairly good. Definitely skilled, though room for improvement I'd suggest, especially with the lines. Chin and hands could be a little more refined. Also proportions are a bit whack, i.e. the right shoulder is too wide. Legs could maybe be angled a little more clearly to better suggest the pose they're in.
Colouring is pretty good though. Has nice atmosphere, and I like the colour balance and lighting/shadowing. If there's one thing you really nail it's the colours and lighting. Just need to clean up your line work in future pieces
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Ahhhh linearts, I'll need be more careful when doing them, and hands are always a struggle to deal with, especially when it's mixed with perspective. I'll need to practice more for that.
I see what you mean by the chin, it's kinda squashed towards one side making it asymmetrical so thank thou for pointing it out ifitwaswhatyouweretalkingout?. Would've never noticed
Proportions, legs and that shoulder, fair enough comment, will take into consideration.
Glad to hear that the colouring is decent though. That's usually one of the things I find myself struggling with. Been trying out some light and dark practices and layering too so good thing that's showing, too.
Overall, thank thou for this critique T'was rather insightful, and well I plan to improve more~
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No worries dude, you quickly identified the errors I was on about which is great. Looking forward to seeing future pieces
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