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Atomic-Chinchilla — ER Round 1: DTKAF-208 ILLU 1

Published: 2012-02-28 02:57:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 2070; Favourites: 11; Downloads: 24
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The loud humming of distant Nincadas rolled through the air as the sun began to sink toward the horizon on this warm afternoon. Sarge the Swampert snorted to himself approvingly as he sat in the shade of an oak tree, chewing on a toothpick. Today had been productive, running around the miles of obstacle course and whipping the new recruits into shape. Some were quick learners. Others...weren't. His job wasn't easy, but he took it in stride and made sure to make personal time for each wimpy, little maggot that fell behind on the track. He liked to hide behind some bushes or around a bend, waiting til the hapless patsy was in range, and then give them some "motivation" in the form of a Hydro Pump or Earthquake. He sometimes wished he knew how to operate one of those human camera contraptions, so he could preserve the looks of shock and terror and make a scrapbook out of them. He sat up as the familiar sound of running footsteps came into his ears; the heavy thumping of an overweight Pokemon and the pitter-patter of a young girl's bare feet. A couple of stragglers falling behind again. He grinned to himself as he got up and stretched, heading for the trees beside the path. Two more for the scrapbook...

Ah, sweet, little Noelle. I am going to have so much fun destroying your life seeing how this war will affect you. And Traum, go easy on the snacks, man.

Finished this today during my first Livestream. 8D Thanks to everyone who participated for the compliments and advice.

Noelle Ref: [link]


Noelle Sainte-Marie and Traum (c) me
Sarge (c) *NightHead
Pokemon (c) Nintendo
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Comments: 25

legofan13 [2014-01-22 16:39:57 +0000 UTC]

"Go Traum!" Makes me wonder how harlequin the haunter is handling this? 

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Atomic-Chinchilla In reply to legofan13 [2014-01-23 01:32:10 +0000 UTC]

Oh wow, this was from years ago. That story was long since abandoned.

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legofan13 In reply to Atomic-Chinchilla [2014-01-23 11:07:27 +0000 UTC]

Though in the picture I can picture Harlequin floating by as he points and laughs at both Traum and his trainer's misfortune.

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Atomic-Chinchilla In reply to legofan13 [2014-01-23 12:05:51 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I can definitely see that. XD

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legofan13 In reply to Atomic-Chinchilla [2014-01-23 14:04:45 +0000 UTC]

I bet Harlequin's laugh sounds like a creepy version of Nelson Muntz laugh from the Simpsons.

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Midnight-Cobra [2012-02-29 18:40:21 +0000 UTC]

Dude, Traum looks like he's gonna collapse. XD The last time I sweat that much it was 100 degrees outside and I was two hours into a Black-Belt competition.

Nice job!

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Atomic-Chinchilla In reply to Midnight-Cobra [2012-03-01 11:29:41 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, he needs to lay off the Twinkies. Just because you can smash a tank with your brain, that isn't an excuse to get fat and lazy, schnoz!

Thanks!

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FluffyScootabunny [2012-02-29 04:56:34 +0000 UTC]

RUN NOELLE RUN! D:

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Atomic-Chinchilla In reply to FluffyScootabunny [2012-02-29 06:43:53 +0000 UTC]

RUN LIKE YOU'RE BEING CHASED BY A GIANT SALAMANDER SPEWING PRESSURIZED WATER CANNONS AT YOU!

...Oh, wait.

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FluffyScootabunny In reply to Atomic-Chinchilla [2012-02-29 16:19:17 +0000 UTC]

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HopelssRomanticGhost [2012-02-29 04:01:07 +0000 UTC]

LOL RUN FOREST RUN! lol

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Atomic-Chinchilla In reply to HopelssRomanticGhost [2012-02-29 06:45:03 +0000 UTC]

Mama always said, "When yer bein' chased by a giant, water-spewin' salamander in an army helmet...RUN LIKE HELL!"

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static-mcawesome [2012-02-29 03:46:50 +0000 UTC]

this is awesome. except i keep looking at traum and going OH GOD WHY D: i thought i was the only person allowed to look like that while running

also i'm super jelly of how you draw feet. wish i could've been there for the stream D:

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Atomic-Chinchilla In reply to static-mcawesome [2012-02-29 06:47:57 +0000 UTC]

There's no way you could look as bad as a yellow tapir. XD

Thanks! They're oddly enough one of my favorite parts to draw. Must be why all my girls are barefoot. :T And I'm having another stream tomorrow! (or today, depending on your time zone) So drop on by! 8D

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Micka33 [2012-02-28 14:01:49 +0000 UTC]

Glad to have seen the progress on livestream ! Great job ! ^^

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Atomic-Chinchilla In reply to Micka33 [2012-02-29 02:24:08 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! 8D More tomorrow!

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Mottenfest [2012-02-28 08:23:50 +0000 UTC]

The dirty feet is a good touch!

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Atomic-Chinchilla In reply to Mottenfest [2012-02-28 08:38:08 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! Running barefoot down a dirt path'll do that. :b

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Freddy-Kruegerplz [2012-02-28 07:04:12 +0000 UTC]

NO SHOES!!!

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Atomic-Chinchilla In reply to Freddy-Kruegerplz [2012-02-28 08:38:56 +0000 UTC]

Nope.

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Freddy-Kruegerplz In reply to Atomic-Chinchilla [2012-02-28 09:07:25 +0000 UTC]

The Feet are a little small, but a minor nitpick.

Barefoot iz good. [link]

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Colatechi [2012-02-28 04:34:00 +0000 UTC]

Cannot unsee Sonne as Sarge's theme.

You're a horrible person, sir. A horrible horible fabulous person.

But on that note, love the colors! everything looks really good! c:

as a note, Malcolm is Vers, but Sarge is actually *NightHead 's. : D
Also we need to trade music.

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Atomic-Chinchilla In reply to Colatechi [2012-02-28 06:13:19 +0000 UTC]

Neither can I now. XD
Why thank you!

Thanks! I'm proud of how it turned out. And strangely it took less time than it normally would without Livestream.LIVESTREAM MUST BE SOME KIND OF TIME MACHINE.

Thanks for clearing that up. :3

S'fine with me. c:

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FakaPokeBio [2012-02-28 03:03:17 +0000 UTC]

Looking at Traum, all I can think is, "Run, fatboy run!"

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Atomic-Chinchilla In reply to FakaPokeBio [2012-02-28 03:15:41 +0000 UTC]

Basically. XD Dude needs to exercise more.

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