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AuchanVriconella ā APH-Shi Shang Zhi You Mama Hao
Published: 2010-08-19 14:34:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 12759; Favourites: 415; Downloads: 359
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(look,finnaly i can make the candle animate,hehe..*happytears*T^T)
Other hetalia animation i make=
Ivan&Yao=[link]
Italy&germany=[link]
I dunno why,suddenly i want to make beautiful art of China and Little Japan,,when China take care Japan...like his mother...^^
somehow..it makes me sad..
............
Remember how we take cared by our moms...
Don't Forget her kindness,
her efforts to give you birth,,with full of pain,,between life and die she stand for you.....
take care you.....
from a little baby..step to step,,until you've grown like now..
Remember,
Whatever happens,
Always Love and Care your Mother...
Only Mother the best person in the world.
And On the bottom of mother foot is the heaven
Dont make regretness,,
because now she's still alive,,
make her happy as the first happiest person in the world
^^v
With Love,Auchan
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Shi Shang Zhi You Mama Hao
(Only Mama is the best in the world) [link]
Finnaly i can submit this picture..
I learn how to make animation,and this the result,hope you all like this
Visit my doujinshi of hetalia and deathnote here=
Hetalia x Deathnote Cross over doujinshi=[link] Deathnote - Solitude doujinshi=[link] Deathnote - Mello & Near- Piece of Puzzle=[link] and i also do Commission,check my profile [link] !^^
Fanart animation by Auchan Vriconella
China and Japan@Hetalia by Hidekaz
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Comments: 148
OMGGGG THANK YOUU SO MUCHHH DEARRR!!!
i-i cant even say anymore...huaaa thank youuu so much for the compliment...it make me flattered,, Youre so kind!!
Im so glad the emotion can reach the others heart toooo,altough the piece still have many lack i think myself,>< I'll do better to improve!
Thank youu again for take your time to give the very kind comment dawww
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It was My Pleasure its a Wonderful Piece! And you should Be proud of it!
It did everything an Good work art should. And Dont worry about the little things it takes time to improve and no one can be prefect!
Keep up the good work And Cant wait to see the next ones to come!
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This is a great piece of anime style art. Classic style; the colors used are effective for conveying the time and the moment, bedtime. I love how the candlelight flickers over everything in the piece, making things look more than two dimensional. The darker background images assist with the effect, creating a warm, tender moment the focal point of the art. I like the small details that have been added to really give this piece detail. The frills on the child's pajamas, the dragon print on the bedspread, and especially, the green dragon spiraling around the candle. This is a lovely piece of art.
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oh wow thank youu so much for the comment
yayy finnaly someone said classic!!
wai thank you somuch for the complimentsss,it really means so much!!
agaiin thank you for take your time to give me feedback,kiss from me XDDD
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You are welcome; it was my pleasure!
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I was surprised when I clicked on full-view and the candlelight started sputtering. I do really like the idea of animating it. The scene itself is very peaceful, and the lighting and facial expressions of both mother and child bring that out.
As for improvements, there are only two things that need to be looked at:
-First, China's hand is a bit small. It's also a bit of a strange shape, but that's understandable. Hands are the hardest thing to draw in everything, I know.
-Second, the candlelight, although nicely executed, is choppy. It could be a bit softer, to make the light itself more gentle.
All in all, there are a lot of good points about this piece. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/sā¦ " width="15" height="15" alt="
Regards,
~KMD17
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Daww Thank you so much again!!
Im really glad the feeling when i make the animation candle is reach others feel too <33
yes its hard to draw hand when draw this honestly i confused to draw hand holding the blanket though o_O
and yes for the candle at first i dont realize it too choopy,but because there also person says that in critique before i was realized that the shining too shine like sun isn't it? XD (otl)
i'll learn colour themes again to improve
Thank you so much for taking your timeeee dearr!!
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well how should i do this..... ive never done a critique before, but thru my experience and knowledge i can say that this image is visually interesting and appealing.
I actually didn't know it was animated, so that was nifty and a nice add. but what i want to say is that there is an atmosphere of warmth and safety. i can relate to this image, and the connection to the audience is well grounded. it is really cute as well, which is something i dont think i should be saying in this critique.
The shading is nicely done, maybe could have smoothed it a bit but it is acceptable because it is anime styled art. i like how you have composited the image as well, with the dull coloured background which brings out the characters in the foreground, and who are also vibrantly coloured.
i will end my critique here, and i hope i have been successful in pointing out what is best about this art piece.
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Thank youuuuuuuuuu so muchhhhhh dearrrr
I-Im REALLY glad you can feel the emotion that i want to put here in the drawing !!!! ;///;
Thank you very much for the compliment,aww your so kind person !!!
and Thank youuu again for taking your time to give critique to my art,SQUeeee
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omg I'm bad in Critiques xD
anyway...
I like this piece of a dark room with some small lights in it...it's like something is saving you when you sleep.
I didn't recognize that this is a animation, first. (just as I clicked on full view xD)
This small effect give them a quiet atmosphere. very nice. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/sā¦ " width="15" height="15" alt="
The things I may to critique are:
1. the hand of the women which is a bit small
and
2. the shoulder of her right arm seems a bit...wide
or is it just me who think it?
and may a tip for doing light.
try to do it more softer...imagine...
it will be one with the objects..
not that it looks on some part as if there a "border" somewhere.
maybe some light beams at the candle instead of a circular,
which is good, for sure, but may try to modified this, that it looks like a beam on some parts...like the sun oo
but all in all it's a very nice piece you did here. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/sā¦ " width="15" height="15" alt="
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Waah Thank you so much for the critique!!
fiuh,im glad the candle lit imake atmosphere XD
ahh yes the hand bit small O_O
and for the tip it really good!! when i make the candle i lil confused too for colouring,next time i'll colour with soft colour and so dont make a "border" like sun XD
Thank you so much for take your time to give critique to my lame art..Thank you so much!!and ah!! i also want to say your drawing is VERY GOODDD >///<
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This is quite the piece, and an especially sweet scene at first glance. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/e/eā¦ " width="15" height="15" alt="
Vision:
Overall, the scene is pleasing to the eye, as is the tender warm colors between baby and babysitter. I love the plush pillows and designs on both their clothing and bed set, but several details are a bit pressing, and clash with the soft love.
First, the flickering light shouldn't be moving all at once. An intermediate ImageReady user can see you're simply moving the layer with the candlelight erratically across the screen, and it detracts from the gentleness of the relationship between China and Japan. It's slightly crude, but it's among your first attempt. I wouldn't be discouraged, proper lighting takes a long, long time to flicker properly in animations.
Originality:
While APH characters aren't original, this representation is. I don't often look for China/Japan couples, much less scenes in which one is a different age than another You can obviously tell I don't follow Hetalia. I like the idea of a loving relationship between these two countries, though both supported an isolationist policy when the Western hemisphere first decided to traverse the globe. It's a nice touch.
Technique:
I've already mentioned the lightning. However, though your flat coloring is fine, the shading's a bit hard on the eyes. Also, if you've an artistic eye, you can easily spot the stock images used as the background as well as the design on China's clothes and on the bed sheets. The images simply look slapped on, as they do not fold or bend with the creases in the cloth (and give credit where credit is due). However, I don't blame you for doing that (as I myself simply slap images on when putting logos on a wrinkly shirt. It's extremely hard to alter images on clothing in motion that way).
However, for the stock image, the background looks like a messy hospital office, what with stray mattress bunkers and papers littering the floor. However, it does have an Asian feel in the window structure, and that earns you credit.
And one rather minor thing, (but it sticks out quite a bit once noticed), you can easily see where you actually used a select tool to cut out some of the candle lighting without blurring (left side of the picture, over the background near the center). It's a jarring effect, as it clashes with the general smoother blending of light and shadow. This chunk could more easily have been gotten rid of if you used a wider feathering radius.e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/sā¦ " width="17" height="16" alt="
Overall, I like the gentle watchfulness of China over Japan, and the main focus of the picture is on them, which is all well and good. However, the erratic lighting and gloomy background detract from this loving atmosphere, and has a more negative effect on the impact of the piece.
My suggestion is to consider softening the glow and blending it more thoroughly. However, your ideas mean well, and those are the essence of art. A considerate amount of effort went into this piece, for sure.
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Wow AGAIN your AWESOMENESS Critique!!
it take me so two times re-read it XDD
Thank you so much for very detailed critique,it help alot!!
and woops you got very sharp eyes!!XDDD my trique of candle has been revealed from you,haha ><
it my first time to do animation and i do it in adobe cs,,
and yes next time i'll give credit,i forget to do it and now i dont know where the link
hurr i failed at this pic it the feeling is not reach very well,>< because you say it have more negative effect O_o huoo i'll work better on colours!!!>//<
Thank youu so much again for the awesome very detail and deep critique!!
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No problem, and I'm glad you found it somewhat helpful.
And I'm actually quite impressed, you do wonderful art, it's just the fine-tuning that takes practice. Your ideas are wonderful, and that makes up the heart of the artwork.
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waah thank you again Youre too kind!!
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Hurr Durr, time for a critc of failure from Xena.. Erm..
Well, first off, the flaws in this are that, one, you shouldn't have made the candle's light animated, it spazzes up my computer and it isn't the best idea to do. Secondly, is it me or does China have womanly features on his face.. I'm not into APH, so maybe or maybe not..
Okay, now the amazing parts in this picture. One, the lines are very smooth, two, the color is amazing, three, the designs on the blanket, fou- There are too many to count XD
This picture is actually a perfect picture and nothing should be changed about it.. except for the candle, that's really buggin' me now XD
Gosh I suck at these
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hurrr thank you very much for the critique >w<
im sorry for the animation,lol but i really want to make it animate,hehe XDD
emm,,yes china is a guy,im little playing at his face to make him more 'motherly' hahahXDD because when he care japan as his brother its like him his mother <3
and Dawww Thank you so much for the nice comment >////< it really means a lot!!
you're so niceee to give comments,Thank you very much again~
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No problem, and I thought my critic was horrible because I just started giving them ^^'
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I know this song. I learnt it in Chinese class.
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THE LIGHT
IT MOVES
WHAT SORECERY IS THIS?
YAO.
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Cute!!!!!!!!!!
They look for Parent and child! (Japan is son, China is Mother.)
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awwww....*whispers* this is soo sweet! (I'm whispering so I don't wake Japan up)
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MAMA CHINA IS almost ALWAYS RIGHT.
Yes. She-he is mama for all those Asian countries.
Isn't mother just the best?
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
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The atmosphere is very peaceful and quiet,
I luv it
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Oh god, the song brought back so many childhood memories... I remember being taught this song in preschool.
Now looking at this drawing, it's so sweet...
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Zhe shi hen hao aru!!
Xie xie ni ^^
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äøå®¢ę° ^^
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(...I haven't type in Chinese for ages...)
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Thank youu so muchh dearr
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You're welcome! ^^
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this is amazing.. i am speachless..
You must be nice person. (^^) Not everyone think like this about mother.
Specially young ppl mostly are kind of rude to there parents.
btw maybe it match a bit... i was listening this song at waching your amazing artwork and while reading your heart touching words... [link]
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T-thank you so much for the kind words...;///A//;
im not nice person at all,still have bad times and hurt someone feelings..but at the same time i want to give more love to the world,,mostly for the person who has born me into this beautiful world,,my mom.
i really appreciate and thankful to be born as human,,
i still learning how to make up my own mind,,and now i know its better after i realize that in this world,everything is not immortal,,everything gonna changes,,sad or happy, rich or poor,life or die..rise and down,,everything moves and changes,even the feeling it self,and love also changes into boreness,,just no one is immortal.
since then i know,everything i gonna mad at before,i just feel relaxed,because i know im master of my own mind..and for what im mad?
mad only give more hurt in person and others.
and after realize someday,i could die anytime,whenever i dont know the time..and is that im already set?
i want to enjoy every single second and be nice..so whenever i gone from this world,i can relieved..that im set if judges time come for me..before of that,i want to return the greatest favor to best person in world,,
im sorry for the long reply,,i just want to share little my feeling..><
aww thats very beautiful song,thank you somuch
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