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Published: 2008-06-04 06:12:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 2231; Favourites: 25; Downloads: 44
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# 14. Naive Yuzo thinks what gun is some kind of magic ^__^Translation:
Баба: ………?
Хигу: Повисите-ка здесь, отдохните…
Дровосек: Ну всё, пацан, ты сам напросился! Жри пули!
Райя: О нет, они его убили!!!
Хигу: Мастер, глупо же Вы попались!
Юзо: Китайская жаба! Это была почти новая рубашка!
Юзо: Я и не знал, что ты можешь использовать магию, чудовище. Что ж, и у меня есть пара заклинаний!
Дровосек: Н-но как?.. ты же мертв!!!
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Comments: 13
that's freakin sweet! I can't wait to see what you've got up your sleeves!
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Great action sequence. I love how Yuzo's shirt was "almost" new.
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Excellent page =3
A agree with that shown above.
Shot -> Bang (Here's a site with plenty of SFX ideas! [link] )
Bubble Box -> Jagged Box
You might want to even consider using other fonts for SFX
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Your welcome! You have amazing potential, dear!
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"This shirt was almost new" is a great line. It would probably be more proper if you said "this was a new shirt" but I think what you have now gives him more personality.
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very nice - as always - but I wouldn't write SHOT into such "bubbles" - looks not "heavy" "loud" or "strong" enough.
but the story is pretty cool
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Okay. I agree - "spiky" bubbles would be better.
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"bang" would be a better sound effect than "shot" for a gun.
Yuzo is so silly here!
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If someone ever shoots me my last thought will be "Bitch ruined my shirt!"
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muahahahahhah! that was funny.
Third panel: "NOOOo you got me!!!! bleh...JK"
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2nd Panel-"Okay, brat! You're dead!
Last panel-"But how? You should be dead!" OR "But how? That should have killed you"
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