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Autumn-Sacura — Yuzo-30
Published: 2008-07-16 05:41:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 1900; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 48
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# 30, and this is last of second chapter. So many words, please help me. Expecially with sound-effects - I absolutely helpless here ^__^Eshmun reminds me of one of my prevous characters - Altan. Only Altan wasn't that crazy ^__^
Russian:
Эшмун: Ты… маленький… ты меня проткнул?!
Юзо: Кажется, да…
Эшмун: Ах-ха-ха! Что за дерьмо?! Мы же бессмертные!
Эшмун: Придется применить мое секретное оружие.
Юзо: Ты забыл наши тренировки? Без руки ты со мной не справишься.
Эшмун: Это для твоей вонючей ивы.
Юзо: Да Хигу куда сильнее тебя!
Эшмун: Я знаю слабое место этого деревянного засранца.
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Comments: 26
nooooo! not Higu D: leave him alone! *slaps hand*
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Oh no, Higu! I love all your characters but Eshmun... is frightening. Even in lipstick.
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His arm zipped off? That's so gross but so cool! Well done!
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*shakes his detached hand* Hi there, mister hand 
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He can deattach not only hands ^__^
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Very intense and exciting battle sequence! A huge improvement over the little skirmish in "Nomads." Can't wait to see how this ends!
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Thank you ^__^ I really like to draw battle scenes, and I'm glad if this came out not so bad!
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The flow works a bit better with:
Panel 2:
"Son of a.. You stabbed me!"
"Looks like that, yeah."
Panel 3:
"Hahahahaha, what the hell! We are immortals, you know."
Panel 4:
"Looks like I'll have to use my secret weapon." (that WAS the original intent in the russian, right?)
Panel 6:
"Don't forget our sparring! You can't win with just one hand!"
Panel 8:
"I know the weak spot of this wooden ass."
I might fire up the good ol' photoshop and do what I did with the first part of your last series, now that I have more time on my hands.
Still, since I'm learning russian, seeing the original text in the comments is good practice. XD
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That could be wonderful! Because I have so much work with visual part, sometimes I just have no time for spelling. And thanks for advices ^__^
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Actually, let me change that to: "I know this wooden ass' weak spot."
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Who0a Omg wtf I love your comic xD Specially how the art isn't just talking figures because I guess you don't like putting words xD but that's what makes it interesting. You add so much details in the backgrounds and have so many action shots it's crazy! Keep up what you're doing 
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Thanks! I always glad if my humble work can be inspiration for someone! And yes, I'm not very good with words, expecially English ^__^
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Thanks, I also like how it came out ^__^
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^^
You're a very talented artist
:3
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"Looks like it."
"We are immortals you know!"
"You can't win without one hand!"
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"Looks like so" should probably be something like... "Looks that way."
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Panel 3- "We are immortals, you know"
Panel 6- "You can't win with only one hand" OR "You can't win without both hands"
Keep it up, I'm really enjoying it
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I has a question for you! I want to make a manga like your making Yuzo but I don't want anyone to steal my idea. How do I keep this from happening?
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Well, this is hard question... Actually, I never thought about it. I just remember one of "South Park" series... If you are really want to create something, you shoudn't afraid of thieves. Because you create art for yourself, for your friends, for the great justice at least ^__^ NOT for profit. Because theaves can't steal your joy from process of creating art. Well, maybe I'm dreamer ^__^
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I know its a fun story but I don't want anyone taking it from me. But the chances of that happening aren't really high. So I guess as long as I do it in a manga like you and date every piece or something then it'll be alright.
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