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KestrelAspen [2012-01-19 22:13:15 +0000 UTC]
i really love how you describe memories in the second paragraph...
"when I think about our past, a migraine overcomes all thought processes taking place in my brain. mud-coloured memories rush through me—a sad distortion. it's a real shame the memories have to be so harshly stored in me that they pound in tune with my heartbeat, through the surface of my skin"
love.
actually, i pretty much love the entire second paragraph. it's perfectly true.
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Magickbender [2012-01-13 20:12:29 +0000 UTC]
Oh wow. That last line especially... just wow. I am so full of tears, so ready to shed them.
Thank you.
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darkmagerikku [2012-01-05 05:19:50 +0000 UTC]
God, the last line is just gut wrenchingly painful and beautiful. So excellent.
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SweetSolitary [2012-01-04 13:23:01 +0000 UTC]
you really don't know how good you are, do you?
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collarbonechild [2012-01-04 02:19:02 +0000 UTC]
this made my stomach turn and eyes sting. i don't know how you managed to write something that feels so rotten in such a graceful way but i love it. it's got me thinking.
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betwixtthepages [2012-01-03 20:26:45 +0000 UTC]
I have a James in my past, too, honey.
And sadly enough, it went a little bit like this...except it was a seven year fall with me constantly reaching out for him, and him constantly rushing in the other direction without knowing he even was.
Lovely work on this!
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pityserendipity [2012-01-03 15:53:17 +0000 UTC]
Oh my god this is amazing ;_;
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drowningdahlia [2012-01-03 02:24:47 +0000 UTC]
sdhkashdjkhdkhsdkj goodness gracious
i'm running out of things to comment. i just know that i want to. on everything.
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