Comments: 22
MissBessanyRose [2012-05-27 09:57:00 +0000 UTC]
"there is something wonderfully intimate about writing a poem for one single set of eyes only"
this is probably my favourite line of ever.
also, i love this piece. it's kind of romantic to meet a boy at a fair. a bit 1950s.
memories intrigue me, too.
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GLTT16 [2012-05-27 03:34:38 +0000 UTC]
this was beautiful. and real. and i love it.
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Lizzy500 [2011-06-16 03:11:57 +0000 UTC]
This is beautiful, and real. I love your writing.
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Jazznessness [2011-06-13 10:46:47 +0000 UTC]
This is so incredibly beautiful. Just perfect, really.
I don't even know how to say how much I loved it.
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Awasteof-paint In reply to Jazznessness [2011-06-16 21:11:59 +0000 UTC]
that means so much, thank you. this is probably one of my most meaningful writings. <3
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drowningdahlia [2011-06-13 05:33:08 +0000 UTC]
oh my. you really are a genius. brings me back to every memory that means anything to me
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crazysingergirl [2011-06-11 22:36:03 +0000 UTC]
and how does one explain the detail of a hand accidently touching another hand?
*accidentally, because this is so perfect otherwise.
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