meimicat [2010-09-15 04:59:10 +0000 UTC]
God created the world so that watanabe asia could make manga.
Good piece but I feel like the background is lacking, maybe if you used warmer colors (i like the idea of red) to give it a more passionate feeling. And maybe (i don't know what other word to use here, I don't mean it in a mean way) dumb down the lips a little. I know you wanna go for seductive but its just a lot of information in one spot and the rest of the image doesn't get that same attention so they really pop out at me. But maybe if you warmed up the rest of the image they wouldn't pop out quite so much (It is a warm spot in a rather coldly colored piece) But awesome awesome drawing I can definitely tell it's Asia's style.
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Axis33 In reply to meimicat [2010-09-15 05:04:37 +0000 UTC]
thanks for the crit lol i drew this aaages ago when i was still new to using opacity on Tegaki, so yeah, i wasnt sure about what colors to use for lips and pretty much everything else you addressed. nowadays i try more subtle and toned down colors, for men, anyway. lol funny thing is that i was JUST looking at that entry a couple weeks ago and thought 'i should have used red or orange in that bg', but then i remembered that at the time i drew it, the entry i drew before it was Italy, who had almost the same bubbly-like bg in red and orage, so i didnt want to do the same thing i had just done, and in the end i guess it ruined it :/ BUT OH WELL lol
thanks for the comments, glad to see another Watanabe Asia lover out there :>
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