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Published: 2012-12-19 10:22:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 8747; Favourites: 262; Downloads: 0
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Yay for lame titles
Obligatory holiday picture. 
Just started doodling and this is what I came up with. Please enjoy! 
* Everything could have been done a better mainly the shading as it needs the most work,but the combo of being sick and pressed for time effected the overall quality of this picture* Ugh I hate getting sick. 
Yakko,Wakko&Dot © WB
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Time for a little Critique:
Lets start with the Warners - They are nice; peerfect for the season today. I like what they are wearing, it's very simple but olorful. Their expressions are very nice and very lively, but the color of the nose seems to be blurry and the bright colored tone unlike the other pictures you've created. The costumes' color seem to be a bit blurry too; I don't know, maybe because you rush the picture or I'm just seeing things (because I'm very sick today, hehe). Either way, there should be more gradient and shading onto them.
Background - Needs a little work there. I am not sure if the tone of the fireplace and the Christmas tree are not proportional, but it seems that the fireplace, together with the picture frame, doesn't look striking, in my opinion. The colors, on the other hand, look very nice; it strikes the viewers tone. I mean, it fits the theme well and they do somehow seem lively also.
Overall - The whole picture looks alright, but you need to improve, after all, personally, I'm look forward from you artworks and I also like to reach that goal too. So, I'll say I'll give you 7 out of 10 for the picture. But it doesn't mean that the picture is not good; it is very good actually, but needs more improvement.
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First off I would like to thank you for taking the time to do a critique. Yes, I did rush the picture just for the sake of posting something holiday related. I have not had much time to work on this and I am not feeling well at this time. So I have not put in as much attention to this one as with others. I am very aware of the background proportions 
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Ah don't worry about it, I myself have troubles too creating a holiday theme picture. I am also very sick at the moment right now. Well, at least it looks nice, not so sketchy and it really suits your style, just an improvement, like I said.
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I hope you feel better soon 
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The stockings were hung so our names clearly showed
I hopes that ol santa would leave a big load
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load of what? dirt? money? gifts?
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*Iz using for desktop BG pic* I ehh, found it, then forgot to comment after I started using it 
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I don't mind, it's okay. 
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Well then thank you! ^^ I usually ask first.
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I'm not sure if I said this to you or someone else, but your Warners look very WANG. (WANG being one of the animation companies that worked on the show)
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Must have been someone else.
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Okay. They do look Wang here. I like how you preferred Warners are Wang. Mine are TMS's, but I drew the Warners for all the different companies on my page.
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Yakko's thinking, "Typical Wakko!"
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possibly as Wakko is great at being a distraction
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what's that thing Yakko is holding behind him? It looks like a gift.....Who's it for? Wakko? Dot? Himself? Oh! I know! Its for the wonderful artist who drew him so well!
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Well it's official wakko will not go anywhere without his hat or his eating habbits.
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and if you remove the had there will be yet another hat of some kind underneath it :3
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I love Christmas with Yakko, Wakko and Dot.
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thanks, glad you like it ^^
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wakko is so cute in that pic!such great art work!
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he can't help it, he was drawn that way :3
thank you ^^
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i love your pic!wakko is sooooooooo cute!is he not?lol love your art!
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yes he is
thank you ^^
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Aww, the Warner Sibs look so very adorable!! I really enjoyed watching their Christmas Specials
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Thank you hun! I'm with you the Christmas Specials were great
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I hope you get better
Awesome work tho, especially for being sicxk when you drew it!
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Thank you hun 
I dislike how being sick makes it difficult to focus on a project.
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