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Page three is up! Now in digital!
In digital, it better conveys the way that Kim is colored in my head. She is much tanner then in the traditional pages!
I hope you guys like it! Every comment I get, even the little ones, mean the world to me! If you've ever made a comic, you'll understand how it gets tough sometimes. If ever I get discouraged, I just think of the nice things people have said, and it motivates me to keep going. So thank you to everyone who has honored me with you thoughts!
Page four soon to come!
Wait a minute, what is this maddness?!?! 2 pages in a row of a pokemon comic and no pokemon?!
Don't worry, I promise a pokemon in the next page! To make things fun, the first person who can guess what it is before I post the page gets a free sketch commission! (To narrow down the options, its a popular pokemon from the first generation.
) Good luck!P.S, the bottom panel is a screen-shot of Arborville from the 4th Pokemon movie. I edited it, but the credit still goes to the artist who worked on the fourth movie.
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That means so much to me! Β Thank you!
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On comic pages, its a lot easier to follow dialogue on a page as colorful as this one if the speech bubbles have an outline. I understand that some times brooding dark, black outlines are a bit excessive. Even a light blue or yellow around them can make the largest difference. Definitely experiment with these page.s.
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Thank you! I've gotten a couple requests to do that actually, so when page four comes out there will be outlines! Thanks again!
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Thank you so much!
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I'm not entirely sure I like the unevenness of the panels borders (my own twitchyness, not actually a problem with it), but you've laid the panels out well, so it's easy to read through without confusion. I love her expression in the sixth panel!
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Thanks so much! That really is something I aim for when drawing comics! I know that if I read something that's hard to follow, I'm likely to just give up on it. So I work really hard to make sure that people can follow my works. Thanks so much for noticing!!!
Haha, everyone likes her expression there. Oddly enough I didn't try as hard on that one as the others. Maybe there is a lesson here? I don't know.
Thanks again!
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It's one of the most important things in making a good comic, and you're certainly done it!
The expressions that flow most naturally get the most compliments. Or something!
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Yes, there is the lesson learned! I shall try to work on my fllllooooow.
I'm sorry, it's late where I'm from, and I can get a little weird past certain hours.
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Don't worry, its late where I am too, and I definitely understand the getting weird past certain hours.
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Ha ha, I love her face in the "KIM!" panel. It's like "OH SHI-! *runaway!*"
Also: her design? Very cute. <3
~ Ver
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Haha! Thanks a bunch!
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I think its very good. The expressions and movement look believable .
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Awww, that makes me so happy! Really it does!!!
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Everything look good. The color, the concept etc.
Maybe give outline for the balloon will make it better
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Thanks so much for your input! In page four I've outlined the balloons due to people like you willing to give me help! Thanks again!!!
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Ha, definitely my favorite page so far. I like the expressions (especially the one in the second-to-last panel with Kim in it) and the interactions between Kim and her "dad".
I'm guessing the next pokemon is gonna be a Charmander. Cause I refuse to guess Pikachu. >8D
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Thanks so much! I'm so happy you like it! Page four is up!
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And how is your story going?
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Yay!
Wait no more!
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yay :3 you havnt been on in a while xD ...or me ._. xD
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OOh, a OC comic! I enjoy reading these 
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Thanks so much for your feedback! I'm so happy you like it! Page four is finally up!
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yay! i love reading comics! im on book 8 of dp adventures! harets is soo cool!
i attempted to draw a comic once. i forgot i cant draw people XD. so i redid it and it's now in short story format. it was a kind of pro louge to pkm mystery dungeon explorers of sky.
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Aww, I'm so happy you like it!
Haha, never give up! I'm sure your drawings are wonderful! Maybe not perfect, but wonderful still the same. It's hard to find art that is bad.
Do you have your story posted?
Also, page four is up! I don't know if you knew that!
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I think it's the best page yet.
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sweet! it did come out good. i went ahead and gave you the link to my fanfic when i commented on that. don't read it all at once! i cant even do that, and i wrote it!
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welcom no problem^^
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I simply can't decide if I prefer tradition or digital! Well, to be honest, I like both so.. uhmm... perhaps you could upoad both the traditional and digital page?
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Haha, I like both too! But digital worked out really great in my latest page. People think it's my best page yet.
So I'll probably be sticking to mostly digital.
Thanks so much for your input!
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Woah! I like the digital a lot better than traditional! (Not saying that the traditional looked bad) Yes! Keep it coming in digital! :3
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Haha, thanks so much! That's good to hear! Page three is up! I don't know if you knew that all ready.
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Sorry it took so long to comment! I like both versions, the traditional and the digital. I find it hard getting skin tones to come up dark enough in traditional work too - they look fine until I scan them and then all of a sudden they're so much paler!
I think the way you make all the different sized panels is really cool, it changes it about and makes it more interesting to read. Many of the comic books I have read that are full-sized books do this, particularly manga books. I don't think comics (as in the magazines thing) do so much. Anyway, it looks good, professional
I love her expressions and body language throughout, they are really convincing and add to the storyline of what she's saying and get us to care about her more. And speaking of, her expression in the "KIM!!!" panel made me laugh
There are a few things here and there that look a little bit off, like her feet and shoes in the first panel, but I think if you kept going to make every panel perfect you'd probably die, or never complete the comic. you've got the expressions spot-on and the main parts of the picture, and those are the important parts.
I'm finding this quite fun to read
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Ugh, dumb scanners. If it weren't for stupid scanners, almost all of my work would be traditional. I always envy the people that can scan their traditional works in and it looks good.
Thanks so much! I'm so happy you think so! That truly does mean a whole lot to me! It's a great compliment and I'm honored!
I'm so happy you like it so far!
Page four is up!
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OMG YAY The 3rd Page Came out XD
I love it, the way you drew her expression is so funny
Especially how the background was drawn its so soft and expressive XD
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Wow, thank you so much! That means a lot to me!
Page four is up! [link]
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I've gotta admit, when I read on the second page that it was gonna be the last traditional one I was a bit like, "Awwh..." Haha
But I really love how, even though she's a bit tanner in the digital one, you've kept her so constant. A lot of people don't do that, so well done! 
P.S. I read your journal and I'm sorry about your Siberian Dwarf Hamster. I know how you feel, my cat died in March and I'm still heartbroken.
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Thank you so much! That really really means a lot to me! I was really bummed about the traditional too, but I did end up liking the digital, and it means so much to me that you did too!!!
And I apologize, because I responded to your other comment before this one, so I hadn't realized that you all ready knew about my Winnifred. It's so hard when that happens, and I really appreciate the empathy.
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Really cool! I can't wait to see what comes next.
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Thanks so much! Your comments mean so much to me!
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