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Published: 2011-02-25 11:11:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 710; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 0
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Description Well I think this is my first upload in about 7 months...damn. XD

This is for a college assignment I've been working on and part of the evaluation says that I should try and get some feedback from people on the work.

So it would be very welcome if anyone could give this a critique, thanks a lot.
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Comments: 8

genericusername11 [2012-09-01 17:46:51 +0000 UTC]

Whoa! When I saw this, I thought you just took a picture of a box, lol! It's amazing that you made that! (Especially to me, because I suck at digital art, haha!) Great job! The details on it are amazing!

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MiharuAkimoto [2011-02-26 00:49:10 +0000 UTC]

I thought it was real there for a moment : 3

What program?

Yeah you could maybe make the box look a little bit more used-

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Azhaq In reply to MiharuAkimoto [2011-02-26 16:20:53 +0000 UTC]

Well that's a good sign : D

And I made this on 3DS Max.

I did try adding some dents to the flaps but for some reason it's not really visible, you can just about see it if you look at the rear flap though.
But yeah, I completely agree, I would like to make look a bit more messed up.

Thanks a lot for the feedback.

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MiharuAkimoto In reply to Azhaq [2011-02-27 01:26:44 +0000 UTC]

Nice, it's another one of those programs I need to get-

No prob, hope it helps : )

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Azhaq In reply to MiharuAkimoto [2011-03-10 16:26:06 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, it can be great fun to experiment with.

And it did help a lot, I wouldn't have been able to finish the essay without that.

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MiharuAkimoto In reply to Azhaq [2011-03-10 17:54:37 +0000 UTC]

Good to hear : 3

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acidbluefire [2011-02-25 20:38:46 +0000 UTC]

Other than that it looks really good.
I was thinking about the cardboard box, the walls are a bit thin, unless it is supose to be thin.
I would put in the wavy part between the outer and the inner layer of the cardboard.

Why not make it more detailed as the rest of the stuff?

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Azhaq In reply to acidbluefire [2011-02-26 16:23:46 +0000 UTC]

I do agree with you, I would like to make it a bit more detailed, unfortunately we had a budget on the amount of polys and I decided to sacrifice the amount of them used for the box to stay under the limit.
But if I do ever re-make this on my own time I will take your suggestion, thanks.

And there is a some writing on the side of the box but you can't really see it and the inside of the box at the same time unfortunately.

Thank you very much for your feedback.

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