HOME | DD
azulhearts — Will you dance with me?
Published: 2008-12-12 21:23:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 913; Favourites: 29; Downloads: 28
Redirect to original
Description
I spent a really long week and a half finishing this D:The majority of the time was coloring... though i only spent 15 ~ 30 minutes a day on it. O.o
Well, hope you all like it!
Time: around 3 hours total?
materials: Prismacolor pencils, gel pens, lining pens
P.S. Critique please!!
Related content
Comments: 43
A really long week and a half was worth it, completely. ._o
You really have a knack for backgrounds, don't you? Or...patterns, in the least. It's simplistic, yet adds so much...and doesn't take away from the girl. Or distracts.
Her shoulders are just a bit small and pointed. I know that's prolly just a mix of me being picky and your style. >_<;; The lack of lines around the neck and chest area bugs me a bit. The shallows at the ends of the collarbone, the lines for the muscles in her neck, so on and so forth. Again...me being picky.
*drools over the hair, again* Something...about it. It's so natural, yet...*scratches her head* Gawd, I don't know what it is about the way you draw hair, but, no matter...It's lovely. And the style is cute. *nod*
Love the little details you put in her necklace, there. With the rose. Wonderful. <3
The way you shade and fold fabric is just...stunning. Absolutely...stunning. *in awe*
...Lovely.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Wow! You got the flow of the dress wonderfully! The creases and everything look really realistic in where they would fall and everything. It makes me want to draw swooshy materials!
A few highlights might give it that little something extra though, in her hair and on the dress, if you establish a light source, helps to give more depth to colouring and makes her stand out from the background a little more, and maybe a few more deeper shadows, like on the top as well as underneath the dress.
But I do really like this, and I actually think you've done really well with the proportions despite what you think 
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Lovely~ The way you did the skirt is fantastic, and her whole posture is quite pleasing. I think you did a wonderful job
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
That's really pretty! ^^ I love the folds in her dress, that kind f thing is hard to do...
The only things I think you could fix are that her arms are a bit too long and her eyes might look better if they were shinier. *nods* Overall, though, great job. ^^
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Thanks for the info!! 
I used gel pen for the eyes and it kind of ruined the white shiny part of the eye, but oh well. xD
Thanks for the fav too! 
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
I know what you mean, arms can be a pain...
And no problem ^^
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Side note: You're lucky you don't have exams before break... its killing me... help!
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
The folds in the dress are fabulous, another thing I've tried to pull off numerous times and just can't.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
wow I love the pose and the dress is amazing great job on this
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
hey! emily right? chandler told me to look at your art, and im glad she told me about it!
this is AMAZING! i am an avid doodler, so when I am in the presence of a great artist, i am filled with feelings of joy and inferiority at the same time. but dont worry, its a good thing. it means your art is mindblowing! and i love it!
yayyy!
keep up the good work!
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
aww thanks
if you wanna see an amazing drawer, check out
shes reaaaaally good and reaaaally nice too
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Gaah! Em, it's beautiful!!!
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
yah its char 
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
i sawww thisss in reallll lifeee! is it just a character you made?
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
I'm gonna use this pic as a refrence for char in amy's present
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
hmmm, i dont think it fits her but ok XD
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
beautiful dress!
...what do u mean by - Critique please??? lol
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
thanks
lol i mean, comment and give constructive criticism. i probably spelled it wrong though
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
oh ok lol i see... i hav done lots of copies of dresses, can i give some advise? hehe
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
yes please
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
cool lol as i said i hav done quite a few copies of dresses like this (u can look through my drawings if ur interested) and i think to improve this you could show more of the gathering in the dress... so like where she is holding it up etc. and maybe at the ends of the scalf thingie too! hope that doesnt sound harsh cos this is a lovely drawing
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
thanks a bunch
Your advise is really useful and i'll try and use it in my next drawing though i don't think its going to have a big, poofy dress in it... hmm xD either way, thanks again
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
you saw it in studyhall today...
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
I know I just didn't know what to put in the box XD
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
thanks
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
well it looks good!
Thats a lot of shades of blue.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Beatiful, yet, sadly my lady I won't be able to dance with you.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
I would kill her if I did so, I can't dance at all ._.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
xD i can't either. never could, never will
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Now talking about the drawing: It's really good, you deserve a !
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
lol thanks
how do you do that big icon?? D: i never know how to do these type of things
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
It's a PLZ account, just type :icon 👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Without blanks!
For example a result: : iconohnoesplz :