Comments: 14
Crazyface202 [2013-01-21 16:10:31 +0000 UTC]
Overall
Vision
Originality
Technique
Impact
Well i'm no expert (this IS my second critique ever after all), but here it goes nonetheless. Your vision is spot-on. What I notice right away that I like is how we see her soles and her body, but not her legs, giving a sense of how she really is locked in those stocks. I just love how big and detailed those soles are, it really looks like you could just take feathers (or pencils) and brush them all over her feet just to hear her make cute sounds :3. It compliments her facial expression and I like how she has only one eye which tells me she's trying not to cry, but she's enjoying it too. Nice body figures and hairstyles too. In terms of originality, while stocks are nothing new, I have to say, her pose is. I like how she's angled in such a way the only her feet are upside down, but not she herself, re-inventing the old-fashioned idea of just simply having her legs in a "floor sitting" position. Your method of tickling isn't the first time i've seen it, but it's definately the lesser common of the "tickle torture methods. Your technique is impressive, the curves are definitive, the colors are appropriate (though a little pale), and the angles are proffessional too. Your impact, though, to me, is nerfed a little bit since what we are seeing here is what's supposed to be two characters having a fun time with each other, in fact, one of them is even laughing, which, you'd think would have a vibrant sort of atmosphere, but the earlier mentioned colors don't exactly scream out anything. Don't get me wrong, your outline for this drawing is solid, but the colors, not so much and parts of this drawing seem a little white in some areas actually. If that's your preffered style and other people appreciate it, then good for you, it just didn't sink in as much for me. Overall though, great proffessional drawing. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Wink)"/>
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Azure-Arts In reply to Crazyface202 [2013-01-21 19:24:41 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, but I want to do it better next time.
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That-Paranoid-Zombie [2012-07-07 22:57:30 +0000 UTC]
And the best part....we can evolve our drawings so keep drawing and don't give up hahaha
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MintyMousyX [2012-06-09 17:35:01 +0000 UTC]
Super cute, but I guess it must be hard draw on her soles XD
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GreenJack21 [2012-06-08 14:52:45 +0000 UTC]
It's even cuter in color. XD
This is proof how loving a relationship can be if it blossoms. It's super cute, and I'm not even the furry type.
I do agree with , he should definitely try coloring those in. XP
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Geassftw [2012-06-08 11:56:11 +0000 UTC]
thats cute and fun take on art
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