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azuriin — Hana's Dessert Time
Published: 2012-12-22 21:46:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 590; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 4
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This is for 's "Winter Desserts" contest for his group .Contest Link: [link]
Thanks for looking
My OC Hana Kuroi: [link]
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This is an AMAZING piece of art; the background looks so unique and has a great choice of color. Your technique is really good but there just might be a few things you could fix: For the hand that is holding the slice of cake, the sleeves are drawn so that it looks like they are in front of the hand instead of "wrapped around" if you know what I mean so you should extend the lines so that the wrist looks like its actually going inside the sleeve hole (did that make sense?), and the hand is too big I think...
Also the middle finger looks a little bit too long and the nose is just a little too off to the side, but otherwise it looks fantastic. The neck is probably a little too thick at the top, and the tines of the fork are...deformed? Some are thicker than others but thats just a minor mistake. I really liked how you colored in her clothes and drew her hair, and her eyes....so beautiful.....anyways GREAT JOB and hope you win the contest XD
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haha thanks
i already knew about the neck, but it was too late to change it T^T
and actually, if you look at a dessert fork, the "tines" are a little eh, different 
and actually the hands are supposed to be around the size of their heads xD and the hand is a bit closer to you so it has to appear a bit larger
thanks for the critique
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ok well I really think you did GREAT on the drawing 
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This looks fantastic! What a wonderful entry!
Sorry for the delay, could you please resubmit this to the contest folder. I was out at the end of last year and start of this one. Thank you!
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sent you a critique....this is a really REALLY RREEEAAALLLYYYY GOOD drawing!!!!!!
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i didn't receive a critique. but thanks!
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really? but i sent one? hmm...
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