Comments: 14
azuriin In reply to cloaks [2013-12-26 16:52:23 +0000 UTC]
thanks~!
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DecepticonFlamewar [2013-03-29 07:38:23 +0000 UTC]
I'm not even this good at drawing, but what I do notice that strikes me as out of place is her mouth and chin. Her mouth is positioned very high for that chin shape, it feels like. Her nose is rather high too, but that could be the style.
I like the detail you used on her neck and shoulders, especially that little dip int he front . That's a detail quite a few people forget or don't care about.
There are also a few places where her hair seems to be slightly crimped or set in a certain position where I don't think it would actually happen. I actually get that sometimes if I dry it wrong, but her hair type may be too straight for that effect and in those places (I only get that near my scalp) It has to do with where the hair seems to fall relative to gravity. I know you're trying to go for like a 1B or 1C hair type, not perfectly straight, but you still have to mind gravity. The bangs are perfect, but the ends of her hair in front, from about ear level down, may need some real hair modeling. I'd offer to send you pictures of mine, but I have 2A and it'd be way too wavy for this character.
Still, I like this. She's not super flashy. She seems like a real girl. Good job
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The-Lost-Hope [2013-03-23 01:47:46 +0000 UTC]
I like the lines and textures, but the shading needs work. I can't tell you lot on shading as I'm still learning myself but I do know that you can make the shadows darker for a start. I have a lot of tutorials in my favorites.
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slycooper11 [2013-02-18 20:42:25 +0000 UTC]
Wow that is so realistic!
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