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B00KAH0LIC β€” I lived a lie
Published: 2008-09-10 04:05:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 170; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 4
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Description Once upon a time
I lived a lie
I was exasperated
And wished to cry

But held my head high
And kept my eyes dry
To be brave for the humans alive
I had to live this lie

But my secret could not be kept
And alone, I finally wept
Don't these people see?
What I do for them and not me

I pretended to be free
But inside it wasn't me
And now I'm finally loose
But I'm empty and over used

I've felt their brute
And was abused
But now I'll start over anew
And hope to make my dreams come true
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Comments: 20

Collector-Of-Lore [2008-09-18 14:57:10 +0000 UTC]

Nice one! You always have good poems.

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B00KAH0LIC In reply to Collector-Of-Lore [2008-09-18 17:27:27 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! That means a lot to me.

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Collector-Of-Lore In reply to B00KAH0LIC [2008-09-18 18:17:06 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome.

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B00KAH0LIC In reply to Collector-Of-Lore [2008-09-18 18:17:51 +0000 UTC]

Aww. I just saw you were on IM, but you signed off as soon as I got back from idle. =\

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Collector-Of-Lore In reply to B00KAH0LIC [2008-09-22 01:55:16 +0000 UTC]

Im on now.

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B00KAH0LIC In reply to Collector-Of-Lore [2008-09-22 02:47:54 +0000 UTC]

Aww. Sorry I was away when you IMed me. =\ I'll talk to you next time, though!

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Collector-Of-Lore In reply to B00KAH0LIC [2008-09-24 02:11:13 +0000 UTC]

We are talking now LOL!

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B00KAH0LIC In reply to Collector-Of-Lore [2008-09-24 02:24:12 +0000 UTC]

Yes we are! Haha.

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Collector-Of-Lore In reply to B00KAH0LIC [2008-09-24 02:38:35 +0000 UTC]

LOL!

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ying6770 [2008-09-10 20:32:02 +0000 UTC]

this is so pretty!!

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B00KAH0LIC In reply to ying6770 [2008-09-10 21:27:42 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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EgoRequiem [2008-09-10 19:24:48 +0000 UTC]

mmmm are you still talking Β΄bout the secret! now you got me all curious about it! But i still donΒ΄t get what youΒ΄re saying, mmm maybe someday iΒ΄ll find out!

really good poem, very emotional and real!

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B00KAH0LIC In reply to EgoRequiem [2008-09-10 19:37:24 +0000 UTC]

Lol. Nope, this isn't about it. XD
Someday you might know, though. XP

Thanks!

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EgoRequiem In reply to B00KAH0LIC [2008-09-10 19:41:41 +0000 UTC]

hmmmm oh well, more mysteries to unravell

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B00KAH0LIC In reply to EgoRequiem [2008-09-10 19:44:13 +0000 UTC]

Lol.

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SaLeM-17 [2008-09-10 15:49:09 +0000 UTC]

very deep. i only have one tiny criticism. in relation to the rest of the stanza, "But I'm empty and used" seems a little bit short. i would maybe put "but i feel empty and used" or something with a few more words. it might flow a bit better that way. nicely done.

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B00KAH0LIC In reply to SaLeM-17 [2008-09-10 15:53:18 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. I think I'll say "But I'm empy and over used".

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SaLeM-17 In reply to B00KAH0LIC [2008-09-10 16:21:32 +0000 UTC]

cool. it definitely works.

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B00KAH0LIC In reply to SaLeM-17 [2008-09-10 17:03:51 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the help.

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SaLeM-17 In reply to B00KAH0LIC [2008-09-10 18:47:49 +0000 UTC]

no prob.

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