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SpringlesSprangles In reply to tiggercudd [2016-12-20 01:21:58 +0000 UTC]

Let's point out the mistakes!

WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning!
Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lived in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and her dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that best idea was to get rid of her so they set up aSPECIALROOM to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died.
Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that reads this letter, on a monday night at 12:00a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death.
Now send this to ten other pictures on this one site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake. apparently, if u copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes u will have the best day of ur life tomorrow. u will either get kissed or asked out, if u break this chain u will see a little dead girl in your room tonight. in 53 mins someone will say i love you or imSORRY

Here are the mistakes
1. She lived in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and dad - She's... ten. They're adults. They could just grab her and like, toss her out a window or something, then call the cops. How did she kill them anyway?
2. If she killed two adults, she should be in a jail, and sentenced to death. Not in a mental hospital.
3. She killed the staff? That's even more people. That's practically impossible. What did she kill them WITH?
4. Gotta love aSPECIALROOM. Also, it says 'As Humane as possible'.. Followed by ' But it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong '. Humane? A murder machine? Humane?
5. Why did she sit in agony? They could just bring out a gun and shoot her in the forehead. Boom, agony over.
6. Hey wait wait wait, when did they make murderous little girls wear white cloaks in mental hospitals? I'd expect them to just leave her in a cell wearing a straitjacket.
7. Why does she waste her time killing HUNDREDS people at midnight on mondays only? And why does she live in a mental hospital, why does she wear a white cloak, why and how did she kill adults and staff, why?
8. Even if this physically impossible little girl ran into your room and stabbed you, you wouldn't just die straight away! You would have plenty of time to call somebody to help you. It never says she cuts you multiple times...
9. Grammar mistakes, grammar mistakes EVERYWHERE
10. THIS ISN'T FAKE, TRUST ME, I HAVE NO PROOF, BUT TRUST ME, IM A RANDOM CHILD ON THE INTERNET.... TRUST ME? TRUST ME.
11. bess day of me life? must not be joke! i wana get kiss or ask out!!! Because that's possible by a silly wall of teext
12. if no u see teribl gurl in room.. TONIGHT. But what if it's not monday? (it is, but what if it was friday? you said it was only mondays..)
13. 53 minutes say i love you or imSORRY? ok but why? That's a lot to do. I think you forgot about the whole story there.

Imma go paste this onto every single CHAIN FAIL i see

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Teetheyhatty In reply to tiggercudd [2016-10-23 04:04:50 +0000 UTC]

mmmmm gotta love the word "More-government"

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Creeperdrawing In reply to tiggercudd [2016-10-22 19:20:21 +0000 UTC]

*Stops halfway though* *Breaks chain* Well I already have a little dead girl in my room .3.

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KaiTheGamer In reply to tiggercudd [2016-09-26 00:09:34 +0000 UTC]

I'm getting tired of this crap!!!

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FazbrearAndFriends In reply to tiggercudd [2016-08-27 18:27:59 +0000 UTC]

Oh come on i seen this over 100 time this is a fake this is not real ok.

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LumenBlurb In reply to The-Heraldic-Sword [2015-06-05 07:25:11 +0000 UTC]

TB: Hey there, how ya doing? Nice to meet ya, are you new in town? Don't think I've seen you before, its great to have new faces around.

Ya get the image.

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Sanes33 In reply to LumenBlurb [2020-06-26 11:30:36 +0000 UTC]

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Flippyisadorable In reply to LumenBlurb [2015-06-13 03:47:50 +0000 UTC]

TB: And if you'd like it, I can give a tour of our enchanted wonderland new and improved without the doors! There's no escape but then, who would wanna leave? It's a  fantastical paradise and it's not make-believe. We're so glad to have another member of the band. You're one of us now, so let me take you by the hand.

I couldn't help myself. XD

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LumenBlurb In reply to Flippyisadorable [2015-06-13 18:20:22 +0000 UTC]

So worth it.

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RachelRosa In reply to TheFabulousBonBon [2015-05-05 22:36:20 +0000 UTC]

Nu!

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Nope24 In reply to Katanimatronique [2015-04-26 11:00:37 +0000 UTC]

You: GET AWAY FROM ME  

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Katanimatronique In reply to Nope24 [2015-04-26 13:45:36 +0000 UTC]

True!

Me:T.B, stop

Me:*punch him in the face*
   

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katomatic22 In reply to iiunacyy [2015-07-01 07:20:53 +0000 UTC]

no!

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iiunacyy In reply to katomatic22 [2015-07-01 11:15:12 +0000 UTC]

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katomatic22 In reply to iiunacyy [2015-07-01 14:11:22 +0000 UTC]

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