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Pokemon (c) Satoshi Tajiri, Nintendo
This fan manga is in Japanese format,from right to left!
The Fakemon credits for this chapter go to:
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So the members of the evil organization uses unknown Pokemon that are the evolved forms of other pokemon? That means that there will be unusual and unknown pokemon in that region that Ash and friends are in.
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hehe no problem, you do such amazing fanfics XD
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This is like aqua vs magma and ash vs Team rocket at the same time, the only one i want to win is Steven
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Cross your fingers for him
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Now, now, I still don't get what's going on but I have a certain opinion of who is the good and who is the bad guy XD I'm not sure how is he going to get out of this trouble this time
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There is no good guy in this world XD
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You use the eye covering hair flick too much on your designs.
That's my only complain
Gotta say the disorted vision is pretty cool.
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Yeah,I sometimes think so as well 
Thanks for pointing it out ^^
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Not for "emo" (Emo jokes aren't even that funny) But it happens that an artist uses a factor too much. Ash has that hairdo too and it really awkward in him. The rest is fine, but after a while it becomes noticeable.
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I actually really like Satoshi's hairstyle...
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If that's so then keep it. Mine was just an opinion so don't take it too seriously.
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