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Published: 2008-01-15 02:51:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 158; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 2
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Description Harsh jagged breathes burning deep in my throat,
Cold and alone, a frost covered young seed.
Lost in a daze somewhere close, but remote,
Befuddled in thought longing for a need.

Overwhelming hurt that will never halt,
Heart piercing expressions, they cut so smooth.
A barrage of words, loathe, love and my faults.
Never saying goodbye, forward you move.

Memories, vividly in my minds eye,
Scaring my soul, left with life too cold
Distorted starry night, alone to cry
Stranded in the middle always on hold.

Moving gradually the life you left bruised.
Going on with no love, cold and used.
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Comments: 4

warpednwyld [2010-03-18 09:21:13 +0000 UTC]

they're good ..... I've recently dropped punctuation etc and just written... it seems odd not writing in rhythm, rhyme but it pours out of me easier... it's the blonde streaks taking over

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basshound77 In reply to warpednwyld [2010-03-18 20:15:16 +0000 UTC]

Its been bout 3 years since i wrote anything, I may have to try that. You are right though, and your work as well is good. Don't let the blonde streaks hold you down ~

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warpednwyld [2010-03-17 14:50:50 +0000 UTC]

wow and you write too

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basshound77 In reply to warpednwyld [2010-03-17 20:55:21 +0000 UTC]

Yeah I did, it's been a while

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