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Published: 2017-04-30 17:14:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 11286; Favourites: 289; Downloads: 26
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Description A commission of my RWBY OC Character Stone, taking and no selling a direct hit to the face from Yang, during Volume 2, Chapter 4: Painting the Town.

Created by   and posted with his permission.

Following the destruction of the prototype Atlas Mech at the hands of Team RWBY, Stone and Neo rush in to intervene. Yang, still at full strength from destroying the Paladin, is first to charge at Stone head on, attacking with the same strike that destroyed the machine completely ...

... only for Stone to stand his ground, and reveal that he is much tougher than any war machine.
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Rycraft2006 [2023-07-21 07:51:09 +0000 UTC]

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Blazing-Saint [2019-02-27 02:47:54 +0000 UTC]

Jeez he's able to tank hits from Yang, man he's no joke

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theonetruemetallix [2019-02-12 18:30:23 +0000 UTC]

I feel that if he fought Haiiro (villian OC) they’d probably destroy Vale!

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TanukiTagawa [2018-11-17 03:04:53 +0000 UTC]

This babe is in trouble!   Neverthless,I will cheer by her victory.  

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Arkham-Knightmare [2018-10-07 04:01:14 +0000 UTC]

Yeah Yang, even your strength is not going to make this guy flinch 

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BULLETPROOFCHEETAH [2018-09-18 11:54:50 +0000 UTC]

You cannot take too many shots to the head of THAT magnitude without getting a bruised brain...  

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deviantfan16 [2018-02-19 17:22:27 +0000 UTC]

Okay this dude is epic. I enjoy hardening abilities and Armstrong and Greed are some of my favorite characters.

It'd be interesting to see how he stacks up against a character I designed. He's based on King Arthur and uses a powerful sword sharp enough to slice huge Grimm and his semblance reflects the power the scabbard of Excalibur gave Arthur

Cool guy none the less. I imagine Ruby trying to snipe him only for it to ping off like a mosquito bite or Nora hitting him only for him to say 'What was that? A toy?"

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Snorri84 [2017-12-15 15:30:26 +0000 UTC]

How does his Semblance work exactly? Does it have limits or drawbacks? Being able to take a punch strong enough to obliterate a Paladin does set the bar very very high.

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Batomys2731 In reply to Snorri84 [2017-12-15 16:14:41 +0000 UTC]

There's a full explanation further down in the comments. Look for my conversation with victorky

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Kr819656 [2017-11-23 22:17:51 +0000 UTC]

Is there a fanfiction of this if their is can you link it because I wanna read it

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Daggoron [2017-11-05 05:57:05 +0000 UTC]

his semblance is based off of senator armstrong's nanomachines from metal gear rising isn't it?  Also I wonder how his semblance would fare against my OC Reaper's full power punch called dragon strike.

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Batomys2731 In reply to Daggoron [2017-11-05 06:06:08 +0000 UTC]

Partially. It also based off of Greed's Ultimate Shield from Full Metal Alchemist. 

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Jhmelott25 [2017-11-03 17:54:25 +0000 UTC]

Stone gives no shits - Yang would be the one to poke that bear...

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Batomys2731 In reply to Jhmelott25 [2017-11-03 19:48:09 +0000 UTC]

Won't do her any good attacking Stone head on like that. With his semblance and natural toughness, she's not gonna do much damage if he can see her attacks coming.

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Jhmelott25 In reply to Batomys2731 [2017-11-03 19:52:45 +0000 UTC]

What is his semblance? I'm very interested 😁

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Batomys2731 In reply to Jhmelott25 [2017-11-03 20:05:53 +0000 UTC]

It's called Stone Wall. A play on his name and how it makes pretty much unbeatable in a straight up fight.

There's a full explanation down below in the comments, as a response to victortky who asked about it as well.

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Jhmelott25 In reply to Batomys2731 [2017-11-04 16:06:16 +0000 UTC]

I'll have to check that out later. Very Nice.

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ec-tapia [2017-10-18 22:34:41 +0000 UTC]

Stone is pretty cool. To make Yang’s punch feel like a light slap on the face... his semblance must be pretty good.

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SchattenLotus [2017-10-08 19:03:27 +0000 UTC]

" Sooo, what did he do? To piss Yang off so much. "


" He said he will cut her Hair when she loses. "


" Oooohhhh (.__.) ... ... "

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siulus12 [2017-08-02 04:17:16 +0000 UTC]

now I just imagined this

volume 9(because admit the protagonist are gonna need a lot of time to be able to fight this guy without getting curb-stomped)

Yang, Jaune, and ruby are running through Salem’s castle. Being able to find its location thanks to Ozpins research and the late Raven's sword 
 
Yang: dammit we have to leave more people behind the more rooms we cross, first Wiess to Emerald then sun to mercury, Blake against that Taurus asshole. 
and Ren and Nora against the scorpion and big dude.

Jaune: keep a cool head yang, have faith in them.

Ruby: I am more worried that we have not yet to encounter that stone dude or cinder.

at hearing Cinder's name Jaune grip on crocea mors tightens“soon Cinder will face justice” Jaune mentally declares

soon  our trio of young hunters find a door at the end of the hallway, the group crosses the door ready and alert and their attention is drawn towards the behemoth of a man that is Stone who is currently blocking the door towards the next hallway

Stone: You have come far children but you will not get past me“ he said while drawing out his weapon

Yang responded with a warcry and jumping towards him while pulling back a punch, Stone did nothing to block it knowing that it will end the same way their first enco-BOOOM.imagine his surprise when he found himself being punched across the room when the ringing of his head stopped he noted that the silver eyed warrior and her sidekick left the room during his brief distraction 

Stone: hn it seems you have become stronger golden brawler

Yang: Yeah and this time I will break you like I did to the paladin’she said while drawing out Raven's sword 

never on the next episode of rwby: the immovable object against the unstoppable force, the walking castle vs the golden dragon 

yang vs stone the rematch 

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Sunwokung [2017-06-02 07:25:31 +0000 UTC]

I can imagine stone being the bane of rwby and would totally break yang's back in one go. And I would think that stone either has a Russian accent or German accent.

Stone: little girl can't break 'the machine', the machine breaks you. 

Stone would just grabs yang and held her up in the air then slams her into his knee hearing a audible crack in her back.

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Batomys2731 In reply to Sunwokung [2017-06-10 06:46:19 +0000 UTC]

Actually, if I had to choose a voice actor for Stone, he'd be voiced by Jonathan David Cook.

Look up Star Wars: Republic Commando, specifically Delta-07, "Sev"

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Sunwokung In reply to Batomys2731 [2017-06-10 16:18:20 +0000 UTC]

Alright I'll go check it out 

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GoRoderickGo93 [2017-05-04 17:04:09 +0000 UTC]

He is more than Havel.

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Kranell [2017-05-02 15:27:59 +0000 UTC]

This is high quality.

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Batomys2731 In reply to Kranell [2017-05-02 16:15:21 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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victortky [2017-05-02 04:54:59 +0000 UTC]

Judging from Stone's expression, he looks completely bored...as if he had been in similar situations before.

I was thinking he was probably feeling like, " (sigh) I told you so..." or "Seriously? In the face? Am I supposed to feel that?"

Or if he's feeling sarcastic, "My long lost (insert family member) can punch better than you, and he/she's only (insert height) tall..."

Or "You know, I just polished my mask half an hour ago. Now you have scratched the paint..."

No selling Yang's rocket punch? I wished we have a canon enemy character who can do that against Yang. 

Lovely colours, posture and expressions! 

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Batomys2731 In reply to victortky [2017-05-02 05:49:48 +0000 UTC]

"Is that it? After what you did to the Paladin, I had hoped for more."

Stone is no stranger to taking the worst of the damage head on. More often then not, he uses his size to shield others, knowing he can take it when others can't. Or, in this case, to show that no matter how tough the opponent thinks they are, there is still a long road ahead to become the best.

Thank you for the fave and comment!

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victortky In reply to Batomys2731 [2017-05-02 16:11:44 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, that was what I was thinking too.

Just curious, what is Stone's semblance? That's a good way for his giant figure to be of use. That's very true. 

Love it! XD

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Batomys2731 In reply to victortky [2017-05-02 16:32:47 +0000 UTC]

(Just a heads up, this is a bit of a wall of text)


His semblance is called Stone Wall. A play on his name and the fact it renders most direct assaults against him useless.

When using Stone Wall, Stone can harden any part of his body in response to incoming attacks, the affected areas turning a dark and rigid black-grey, with some splotches of red on the outer edges. His skin, muscle and bone, as a result of the hardening, becomes highly resistant to physical damage, and combined with his natural toughness and increased healing speed, renders Stone virtually indestructible to nearly any form of attack, be it blunt force or even gunfire or explosives. Even Yang's megaton punch, powerful enough to destroy the Paladin, is unable to do any serious or permanent damage to Stone body because of his semblance hardening before she even had a chance to strike him. 

In addition, said semblance can also reattach lost limbs, as evidenced by Stone reattaching his forearm shortly after it was sliced off by Amber in their fight scene in Volume 3. 

Although the semblance was initially intended to harden when faced with blunt force trauma, it also possesses functions similar to a self-repair unit, healing any cracks or dents he receives over time. The semblance can also be activated at will, even when no attack is incoming, and can even create a full body shield if so desired (think Greed's Ultimate shield in Fullmetal Alchemist).

Unfortunately, while the semblance makes Stone a very powerful individual, he still possesses a few weaknesses that limit his power. For one, while very durable, Stone Wall seems incapable of reacting to sudden or rapid forms of damage. A surprise attack that Stone doesn't see coming can get through before his semblance responds. One example occurs against Ozpin, where he is briefly overpowered by Ozpin and knocked back, despite being the stronger of the two.Similarly, despite bracing himself and hardening for the final blow against Amber, he was still stunned and vulnerable to her rapid slice attack immediately after the first strike, indicating that even hardening his body had its limits. These instances both show that his semblance works best when an attack is slower or when Stone sees it coming, thus is prepared for and aware of the attack.

Likewise, there is also a hint that there is a delay in the hardening. Subtle, but a quick enough strike can injure Stone's unhardened body, as seen when his arm was cut off by Amber. The attack succeeded because it sliced ahead of the hardening. However, the weakness could also be turned to Stone's advantage, as his semblance formed a makeshift blade after the forearm was severed, which he used to severely injure Amber, taking her arm as well.

All in all, Stone Wall is a very powerful shield and weapon. Not without its flaws, but it makes a juggernaught like Stone even more tough to take down.

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victortky In reply to Batomys2731 [2017-05-03 07:50:53 +0000 UTC]

Very interesting semblance, and I love how well thought out it was. 

It's very similar to Greed's ability in FMA combined with Senator Armstrong from Metal Gear rising revengeance. 

Wow, that battle against Ozpin was pretty awesome, and so does the battle against Amber as well.

It makes him a nearly unstoppable Juggernaut. True, but it's a semblance that works and counter's attacks from opponents like Yang.

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Snorri84 In reply to victortky [2017-12-16 00:51:36 +0000 UTC]

I like that the Semblance matches his personality and name. Immovable as the mountain, as they say. A lot of original characters that I've seen has a Semblance that doesn't seem to match the character at all, as if it was added just because it's cool or overpowered. Not all OC owners can explain in detail how the Semblance works. So you did a good job there.

Seems the trick is not to bother using big and powerful attacks on him, but instead try to wear him down his Aura over time with multiple, weaker and faster attacks until he can no longer use his Semblance. After that he will need to rely on his toughness, armor, and dodging.

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victortky In reply to Snorri84 [2017-12-16 16:27:42 +0000 UTC]

Ah yes, that does indeed make sense. Well, I have seen that happen many times.

In short, death by a thousand cuts.

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chbedok [2017-05-01 16:09:30 +0000 UTC]

It is either;

"The Mech was built because I can't be everywhere at once."


Or;

"I should have dodged that. Oh! NVM, it wasn't as bad as I thought."

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Onisatsu18 [2017-05-01 01:31:25 +0000 UTC]

Epic! Stone looks and seems very interesting.

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Batomys2731 In reply to Onisatsu18 [2017-05-02 05:43:48 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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Onisatsu18 In reply to Batomys2731 [2017-05-02 12:26:35 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.

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ViriZona [2017-04-30 22:45:01 +0000 UTC]

I have to say, your character Stone is really interesting! 

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Batomys2731 In reply to ViriZona [2017-05-02 05:43:36 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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ViriZona In reply to Batomys2731 [2017-05-02 20:05:44 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome! 

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Nextgen2015 [2017-04-30 18:54:49 +0000 UTC]

General Zod: Well, if plan A dosen't work, plan B always does.

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KnightyNightey [2017-04-30 17:23:57 +0000 UTC]

*Yang striking Stone with the force of a missile.* 

"...was I supposed to feel that?"

I wondered of how the Main cast would interact with your OC. Now I know

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