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chanizard1 [2018-06-29 21:42:46 +0000 UTC]
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Fuck dats awesome
Nah, now a more formal evaluation:
I think the style is really good, and now it feels more like a original pokemon rather than the Braixen + Dartix that it was, but a thing that kinda bugs me is that it is a really big jump from the original, for example, I'm missing the glasses of the other 2 phases (even if I gotta say it looks better without glasses, maybe put the glasses on the forehead rather than the face?), and also, it has a really fememine look, compared to the preevolutions, that were more like a male teenager, but thats all the "Negative things", I gotta say, I would believe it if someone told me that this is a real pokemon from the new gens, the concept and the technique.
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Bearmation In reply to chanizard1 [2018-06-30 00:12:24 +0000 UTC]
Thank you.
Actually, you know how most starter pokemon are predominately male?
Well, the Chirplum line is meant to be predominately female, hence the appearance.
I have this rule were if a Pokemon looks feminine, then it actually has to be female.
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chanizard1 In reply to Bearmation [2018-06-30 08:37:19 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, thats not the problem, the problem is that the 2 preevolutions seem male
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ChrisKrossAppleSauce [2018-07-04 13:32:25 +0000 UTC]
Oh shoot I really like this! In all honesty, it seems people give pokemon a lot of crap over having a weapon or holding something naturally, but I was always intrigued by it! It really works well here! I love the whole mystical concept!
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chanizard1 [2018-06-29 21:43:05 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, thx for english
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Bearmation In reply to chanizard1 [2018-06-30 05:58:58 +0000 UTC]
Also the reason why Chirplum and Witchirp have goggles is because originally, the Chirplum line was going to be based on plague doctors, but I changed to
a sorceress after the region change. I kept the goggles because it kind of made them look more intelligent (Because ravens are actually very intelligent in real life) and it gave them somewhat of a personality and
interesting look. Necraven doesn't have goggles because she looks more attractive and mature without them.
I also kept them so that Chirplum would just look more interesting and original as a starter instead of looking like just a raven chick.
All three of my starter were mean't to have theme behind them instead of looking like just straight up animals.
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Bearmation In reply to chanizard1 [2018-06-30 00:07:04 +0000 UTC]
Yeah I don't why I didn't just do that from the start.
At first I wanted to make them look like those legit Pokemon
concept art sheets.
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