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BejitaDBZ — Forced Evil...

Published: 2009-04-01 14:28:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 1768; Favourites: 25; Downloads: 12
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Description The dungeon's walls were damp and flaking, while water from condensation settled on the ceilings and on it's surface. Mould and the sweat of all who inhabited it gave the atmosphere and unpleasant and unsettling odor to the air. It could almost choke you and make you sick. Torches of fire lit the way up to a stair well, which wound it's way up and up and up... and up.

Echoing footsteps on concrete and stone floor could be heard making it's way up the steps. Into the darkness above... screaming was heard and cries of agony every moment or so, through the cells and torture chambers.

Ahhhhhh!!!!!!!!!

A woman's eyes blinked as she peered into the dark surroundings. She wondered who these people were who cried from their pains... and in such a horrible place as this. Her stomach felt bruised against the muscle and bone of the man who carried her. A man she knew most of her life. Hiroki... A little flailing action caught her eye once again to the bottom left of her sight and she looked down. Her friend had been dragged some way by her throat. She wouldn't be surprised if her whole neck was purple and blue by how strong this man was. Her friend's face was bloodied from a single punch from this man and she was dramatically weakened by it. Currently now, she was conscieous and had struggled to fight him, but to not the slightest effect. She kicked the ground and dug in her heels as she was bent over backward. She choked.
''I can't believe you are doing this! You're Niki's friend! My mothers friend too! Why are you doing this to us! We've done nothing wrong!'' Nikito, the woman over the man's shoulder, looked at her with sad eye and turned her eyes away to her bound wrists and bloodied hands. Her forearms rested against Hiroki's back. They had put up a fight, but it didn't last long at all... it was all so fast...! But then they found themselves in here...
She blinked, her blue eyes feeling hot as tears started to build. But she refused to blink again and let them break the surface. She turned her head.
''Hiroki... I know you wouldn't do this unless you were forced to. I know you. You... were just like your brother but more silent. And much more of a gentleman'' She laughed nervously, but with sadness in her voice. ''I know you want them back... your brother and that woman you love... but please... don't take Hope with us too. Please let her go free; she has a family, friends!'' It didn't look as though Hiroki was about to answer but then he finally spoke.
''I can't... I wouldn't do this if I knew I was able to beat them... but I can't do this alone, and anyone I can rely on to help me is either dead or they are one of 'them'. What else can I do...'' He blinked, his left eye able to see but his right eye completely white and blinded. Nikito swallowed, her voice sore from when she had experienced the 'first round'. First when they awoke, she was the older of the two girls and had undergone treatment of some sort; strapped down while her tendons for her feet were cut and she herself had to rip the nails from her hands. The blood now was crispy and blackened but her ankles still bled and burned hot from the deep wounds. Her attention to her wounds was broken when Hiroki moved his right arm in a bigger motion than how he had been and saw that Hope was now being dragged by the hair. The young girl flinched and whispered, now having relief for her swollen neck.
''You... you can't be serious...'' Her voice was so quiet Nikito didn't know what she said until she herself turned her head to look over Hiroki's shoulder. A room lit round it's door showed a room plunged by darkness a meter in. The strong scent of blood and rotting dead hit her and her body froze, her eyes dialated with fear and she couldn't breathe. Disgusting sounds were heard from the other side and silhouettes were seen of what 'things' were beyond the door. She felt the muscles of Hiroki's back tense and his hand on the base of her spine press and take hold of the material of her top. He inhaled.

''I'm sorry...''
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Comments: 22

VB-Creation [2009-05-05 01:02:18 +0000 UTC]

I dont think I could EVER draw him as awesome as you do!! This is so awesome hon! he came out hot!! I love it!! and Nikito looks so lovely!! Damn! I didnt think you could draw anymore awesome than you already do but holy jesus girl this is amazing!!! 0 !!! Im so impressed!! I wish you were online more so we could rp Pumpkin and Hiroki!! missu a ton!!

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BejitaDBZ In reply to VB-Creation [2009-05-05 07:54:45 +0000 UTC]

Online online???? 8D Which one? Yahoo or MSN? Coz I could always see if yu're online more now. I think I sorted out a few things that started piling up over time. ^_^ Plus I haven't RP'ied with him for a looooong time. I really REALLY need to...

Oh man, yu flatter me... heheh but I wish it could be more awesome than this. ~_~ I have no self esteem whatsoever. Yu do excellent work that gos far beyond mine and yu don't even need to to do backgrounds or colour in to exceed my work.

Meh wanna draw a piccy SO BAD of Hiroki and Pumpkin. >.< I just don't trust my memory with Pumpkin. (She has long, firey coloured hair down to her waist? bandages round her stomach and waist. She has a fringe? Um... and she's so feminine and elegant looking....! X3 Does she have accessories too?? >.>

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VB-Creation In reply to BejitaDBZ [2009-05-05 19:46:03 +0000 UTC]

i have both!!! bloodycelia@hotmail.com and celia_bloodharpy for yahoo!!

I have really fallen out of my skills cause i havent drawn in so long so I know how you feel, my self esteem sucks when it comes to my art but then again we are our own worst critic!

gah u no what I will update her and draw her today cuz i cant even remember LoL me=epic fail

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BejitaDBZ In reply to VB-Creation [2009-06-01 15:54:44 +0000 UTC]

So sorry for the long and late reply. >.< For I have been on holiday and there was no internet up there. Haha! Sounds like I was in one of those places where they live in customary oldern times. XDD Naaah.

Yu really shouldn't have low self esteem at all! I fav yur art when yu do the line-art! I think they are amazing and can stand well on their own. See, I would buy lots and lots of those!!
That reminds me... I still need to do get into doing all my art now... waaaaaaa!

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Punisher01 [2009-04-06 00:11:24 +0000 UTC]

DARK... is all I can say of this. Nice sketching techniques used.

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StarbearerTM [2009-04-01 22:44:29 +0000 UTC]

Awesome pencil shading!

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BejitaDBZ In reply to StarbearerTM [2009-04-01 23:33:19 +0000 UTC]

Thank yu so much! ^_^
Took me ages and my pencil was getting too blunt to work (too lazy to get a pencil sharpener, haha)

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StarbearerTM In reply to BejitaDBZ [2009-04-02 03:42:25 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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Yunaleska1 [2009-04-01 17:07:05 +0000 UTC]

THAT'S the picture you used my underwear for!!!! lmao. You know I love this

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BejitaDBZ In reply to Yunaleska1 [2009-04-01 23:32:30 +0000 UTC]

Well, not really. Couldn't find or decide anything Niki would wear, so I found something to copy on Google image (lace, not porn, lolz ) and made the rest up. Geez woman, don't flatter yurself. XDDDDD

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Yunaleska1 In reply to BejitaDBZ [2009-04-05 20:10:12 +0000 UTC]

TwT aww i thought I was useful for once

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BlackKusanagi [2009-04-01 16:13:35 +0000 UTC]

Very well done Beji!

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BejitaDBZ In reply to BlackKusanagi [2009-04-01 23:37:19 +0000 UTC]

Thank yuz! Now I can draw the woman that I will show ya! Hmm, won't be in great detail as my days are packed this week and the next so I'll put her down as best as I can until the ed of the week. Heheh..

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BlackKusanagi In reply to BejitaDBZ [2009-04-02 01:30:46 +0000 UTC]

I cant wait to see. XD

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Kaiju-Borru-Zetto [2009-04-01 14:43:52 +0000 UTC]

O _ o

*is... speechless*

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BejitaDBZ In reply to Kaiju-Borru-Zetto [2009-04-01 23:36:03 +0000 UTC]



Aw, it ain't that bad. At least I've done an updated version of Niki and at least another piccy of the Hope and Hiroki. ^^

But *gasps* Yu no like the piccy?? O.o *looks around quickly and grabs a eraiser*

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Kaiju-Borru-Zetto In reply to BejitaDBZ [2009-04-01 23:37:58 +0000 UTC]

Meep o A o

It's just... it saddens me to see Nikki being hurt :<

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BejitaDBZ In reply to Kaiju-Borru-Zetto [2009-04-01 23:52:24 +0000 UTC]

And she always goes out of her way to help others, even if she's not a physically strong person, she has alot of love to give to her friends and others around her. ^w^

It does? Yay! (That yu care that much meaning). I don't mind if yu help her and that... that's be GREAT! That'd be awesome!! Yu never know =^^=

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Kaiju-Borru-Zetto In reply to BejitaDBZ [2009-04-01 23:55:26 +0000 UTC]

*save her, does want* ; A ;

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BejitaDBZ In reply to Kaiju-Borru-Zetto [2009-04-02 00:27:26 +0000 UTC]

Woah, really? That'd be insane! Yu can! I wouldn't mind one bit at all! *hint hint* save the damsel in distress mister! XDD Hahah!

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Kaiju-Borru-Zetto In reply to BejitaDBZ [2009-04-02 00:32:13 +0000 UTC]

*runs to save*

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BejitaDBZ In reply to Kaiju-Borru-Zetto [2009-04-13 16:58:24 +0000 UTC]

Go Go Kaijuuuuuuuu!!!!!

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