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Published: 2013-08-18 18:10:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 329; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 1
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Not sure how old he looks to you guys but this dude reminds me of a really mean Asian grandfather kind of dude that lives next door and that's what I was going for. My first realistic sculpt and I feel....... idk how I feel. I KNOW I NEED HELP SO PLEASE GIVE ME CRITIQUE SO THAT THE NEXT ONE CAN BE BETTER. THANK YOU SO MUCH >.<Blender 2.67
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The sockets should be deeper, 'dent' between lips and chin, pull back of jaw forward a little, something weird going on with the cheeks.
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Haha yeah they are a little puffy. Do you think that the eye sockets are to far up like if you look at it from a side angel???
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No, they're about right. Β Also, I just noticed the eyes are looking a little slanted. Β Look closely at references.
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Lol thank you very much >.<
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Your Welcome.Β
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He does look Asian and sightly old. Like many new sculptors (myself included) You suffer lumpy face issues. The face is lumpy but they are not really wrinkles. Us a smooth brush and go over place like the top of the head the cheeks and the neck to smooth it out. Then with a crease tool or clay strips tool map out wrinkles. Great start though. It looks like you took some thought about it when sculpting.
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Zomg thank you so much that's exactly what I needed. I will make sure to work on that in my next sculpt >.<Β
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Nicely done.
He looks mean and Asiatic, but not particularly grandfatherly to me.Β Β I suppose the the signs of age may be more subtle in Asiatics.
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Thank you so much for the critique
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