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Published: 2014-11-18 17:03:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 788; Favourites: 27; Downloads: 3
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I needed to get this out; I wanted to mess with formatting and concrete poetry.
This started out as a paint splotch and paint brush, but ended up being mad chaos--an angry Rorschach. I think it's more fitting.
November 18th, 2014
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I love it when words dictate the shape. They have a form, a shape, in their pacing, but its more organic and disorganized than a picture. I like it a lot!
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Thank you so very much!
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Sweet Mary, Mother of F, this is absolutely perfect.
It is expected of you though. I adore your stuff. <3
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Goodness, that's such high praise--thank you so much! I'm glad it spoke to you.
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Thank you, honey! I'm glad this piece is being so well-received, it was very experimental for me.
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Absolutely excellent. This is the kind work I would use in a classroom if I were teaching different forms of poetry to students. I love every moment the text breaks words up as though the writer (you) were stalling to think about the rest of the word - whether it was right or not - and that gives that perfect sense of confusion when the outside world is conflicting with the inside world.
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Goodness--thank you for such an awesome comment! I'm so glad you enjoyed this piece, formatting and all!
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like i said, you're killin' it!
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Thank you--it was very experimental for me.
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