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watdafahk [2015-01-22 19:51:14 +0000 UTC]
I guess that this admiral is a grown-up Chan. Anyway, good story and good drawing.
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Timmy-22222001 [2011-07-25 01:51:04 +0000 UTC]
Certainly wouldn't call anything out of shape with a body like that there Bfetish, wow!
Ironically enough just did a piece of Ty Lee looking a little more mature but damn always keep forgetting about how badass Azula would look and wow you nailed it without a doubt!
Really blown away at your design work on the picture itself, feels very much like comic book how she's posed with that dangerous look on her face and damn you didn't skip out on the charming side she still manages to show off.
Besides the body excellent work maturing her look, from the development of the face to even lengthening the hair to show off some age has passed her by, well done Bfetish.
Also hats off on the story you went to include too, quite well writing considering you still captured her evil and twisted nature of watching people burn and that again shows as you watch her tease you with her flames in her right hand.
Bravo Bfetish, bravo!
Later,
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Bfetish In reply to Timmy-22222001 [2011-07-25 08:04:00 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for the comment Tim.I just tried to stay true to the character.
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xelanesque [2011-07-22 22:13:33 +0000 UTC]
She looks more dangerous than ever
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Bfetish In reply to xelanesque [2011-07-23 03:24:32 +0000 UTC]
Thats what I was going for when I Was drawing her.
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ninjablood13 [2011-07-22 13:58:14 +0000 UTC]
Nice pic! I really like the story, it makes a good read.
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Bfetish In reply to ninjablood13 [2011-07-22 18:33:23 +0000 UTC]
Thank you.I'm glad you enjoyed the story.
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Bfetish In reply to omdway [2011-07-22 18:32:58 +0000 UTC]
Ignore the film.Just watch the animated T.V series.The movie was rushed and was not good.
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Bfetish In reply to MKbuster [2011-07-22 18:32:12 +0000 UTC]
Thank you.
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MKbuster In reply to Bfetish [2011-07-23 00:21:35 +0000 UTC]
no prob
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MetellaStella [2011-07-22 06:58:23 +0000 UTC]
Interesting, you didn't go the "healing" route of waterbending (hinted at with Jet) or spiritbending (not taking her bending, but working with her to channel it into something more positive.)
"Zuko also suppressed her memories of all that transpired after Zuko was banished from the fire nation"
And what, I wonder, happened during that time? And why did he want to do this? He did the very thing he didn't like her doing- lying. -_-'
PLEASE CONTINUE THE STORY!!! I would be more than happy to help you flesh it out into chapters- there's at least three or four's worth here.
I would also like to color your lineart. May I?
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Bfetish In reply to MetellaStella [2011-07-22 18:31:49 +0000 UTC]
The reason I didn't go the healing route because Katara would not have agreed to do it.And my version of Katara is the most powerful water bender. I never heard of spirit bending. I wanted a way for Azula to remain a powerful threat.That is why I took the route I did.
I basically had Zuko suppress everything that happend at the time he was banished to the battle they had from Azula's memory. So everything from Season 1 to the final T.V. movie Azula had no memory of.
He didn't want anything that would trigger any high emotional response. This would make the hypnotic suggestion less effective. Zuko wouldn't lie if it was for bad reasons or to hurt someone.But he like every person with good intentions will tell a white lie. If he told her the truth even after the use of hypnotic suggestion Azula probably would have went out of her way to despise him. And things would not have been any diffefrent than they were before.
Granted at the end of my little story the she still reverted back to her formal self but a lot less crazy.Which makes her more dangerous.
I actually have a just a line art with out all the rendering that you can color.SEnd me your e-mail and I'll e-mail it to you.
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MetellaStella In reply to Bfetish [2011-07-22 19:17:20 +0000 UTC]
What about other healers? Yes, they were attacked by the Fire Nation, but surely one of them would buckle for what is really a young girl (and she wasn't even at the attack on the Noth Pole.) There are waterbenders that have been healing a lot longer than her- she may have gifts but surely she's not the absolute best at healing AND fighting. (that would be a little bit Mary Sue-ish) In fact, she refused training for healing. Spiritbending is what Aang did to Ozai in the finale. But some postulate that there are different versions of it than just taking away bending.
But what was going on with Azula during the first season, I wonder? That's a really big gap of time to erase. That's not just a white lie.
Actually I like the pencil-shading. But I'll note you with my e-mail, too, and figure out which one I'd use.
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Bfetish In reply to MetellaStella [2011-07-22 20:04:00 +0000 UTC]
I didn't consider there would be other healers. But most of the water tribe benders were captured and put in prison.
Sure there may be water benders out there who are better healers. But over the course of the T.V. series Katara is the one with the most battle experience and battle tested. She may not be the most powerful water bender but she is probably the most creative.Pure power can't replace actual experience in terms of using abilities in battle.Katara has one extra skill that puts her over the top over other water benders. And that's her ability to blood bend.
True Katara is more of healer.And she may not be the best healer. But her battle experience and her ability to blood bend makes her the most dangerous water bender. And in 8 yrs time I'm sure her abilities have improved.She has done more with her water bending abilities as young teenage girl than most water benders have done in their life time.And this is based on the T.V. show.
Azula didn't play a big role in season 1 as she did in season 2 through the T.V. finale. So just chalk that up to writers discretion.
Zuko is not dumb nor is he a goody to shoes. He is the Fire Lord now so he is knee deep in politics. He also has opposition with in his own circle. So I'm sure Zuko had to learn some under handed tactics to achieve his goals.We even learned that when he pursued the Avatar.
As far as lieing to his sister to protect her sanity.He did out of love. He would consider that the lesser of evil things he has done. So I would consider that a white lie. A lie is a lie, so that makes it bad. But if it was for the greater good then it serves a purpose that is beneficial for her and for him.The question is, but is it really?His decision appears to may come back and destroy him. But that makes good fiction.
Ok I'll send you the basic line art.Thank you
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HENshin2885 [2011-07-22 04:47:56 +0000 UTC]
Wow...this chix looks badass...
[I'll post comment again once I read the story]
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HENshin2885 In reply to Bfetish [2011-07-23 20:58:08 +0000 UTC]
Ahh Avatar characters.
I don't watch the show but this sounds really interesting reading material.
Thumbsup for sure dude!
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