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walsh234 [2022-09-06 23:37:04 +0000 UTC]
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brownpinto3 [2019-10-06 04:56:14 +0000 UTC]
Please continue!!! It is really good!!
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brownpinto3 In reply to BIackR0se [2019-10-07 13:09:55 +0000 UTC]
Sorry to hear about your dad, and congrats on the marriage. Thank you for still wanting to write.
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Peaches-Gt [2017-07-04 11:48:25 +0000 UTC]
This story is off to such a good start!! Do you think you will ever write another chapter?
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tp32 [2016-05-05 23:04:12 +0000 UTC]
I like the premise of this. Please continue !!
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BIackR0se In reply to tp32 [2016-05-07 21:55:44 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! I'll update when I find the time. Theres a few things I'm rethinking about this story.
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tp32 In reply to BIackR0se [2016-05-08 02:08:12 +0000 UTC]
Your Welcome, Awesome, am looking forward to what you come up with !!
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BIackR0se In reply to tp32 [2016-05-08 14:36:12 +0000 UTC]
I'm glad to here it! I hope to get it out soon but I really think its going to be awhile. My dad was in the hospital and had to have heart surgery and on top that I'm moving in about two weeks. So sorry for the wait but life happened.
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tp32 In reply to BIackR0se [2016-05-08 16:25:42 +0000 UTC]
Sorry to hear about your Dad. That is alright, life is more important.
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Peaches-Gt [2016-01-28 21:48:07 +0000 UTC]
More Please!!!
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BIackR0se In reply to Peaches-Gt [2016-01-31 01:05:02 +0000 UTC]
More is coming soon! I hope!
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Vishuddah In reply to BIackR0se [2016-01-28 20:35:46 +0000 UTC]
Hahaha yes it is ^^
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Friendlyfoxpal [2016-01-25 07:44:37 +0000 UTC]
Oh this looks interesting. I would love to read more someday. ^^
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Friendlyfoxpal In reply to BIackR0se [2016-01-25 23:50:08 +0000 UTC]
Oh yeah, i hope so too! And it looks like you did have fun with this. :3 And i think it's good to create while you're inspired.
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WingedKuriboh27 [2016-01-25 05:54:22 +0000 UTC]
I like it a lot. But it would help if you could settle on a POV. I'm sorry, it was just a little confusing
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BIackR0se In reply to WingedKuriboh27 [2016-01-25 16:36:49 +0000 UTC]
I'm glad you like it! Yeah I'm working on my righting skills sorry for the confusion. This chapter is told from Aiko's point of view. If I change views I plan to point it out before hand. Hopefully the next chapter will be easer to understand.
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tp32 [2016-01-24 20:59:49 +0000 UTC]
Great start, I will continue reading it also if you decide to continue it.
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BIackR0se In reply to tp32 [2016-01-25 03:00:20 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! Yeah I'm planing on continuing. Right now my two jobs are making it hard for me so I dont know when I'll be able to find time for the next chapter. Hopefully soon! I appreciate the comment!
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tp32 In reply to BIackR0se [2016-01-25 08:27:59 +0000 UTC]
your welcome, That is ok, work is more important, take your time.
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Sugumih [2016-01-24 19:05:16 +0000 UTC]
I am very bad at commenting and I do apologize for that before hand incase I forget to comment on new chapters of this story :3 but this was really great and interesting so I will continue on reading this incase you decide to continue it ^_^
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Sugumih In reply to BIackR0se [2016-01-27 21:47:19 +0000 UTC]
Yeah...Family @@ heck I find it hard to write when my boyfriend plays ps4 xD and you don't need to thank me for commenting, thank you for uploading! :3
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