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Noioo [2017-06-27 15:45:31 +0000 UTC]

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Hello hello!
This is my first Critique, so, sorry for bad okey?
I think this is the nice exhibition of Sans. I like the design and the original paper texture. But. The pose -- hmm. It's not that bad. Just looks like the shoulders are lil bid far from each other than normal. The face looks normal. I like it. More than the CHIBI style. But. The hoodie. I think the hoodie is simply too small for his head. His big head needs lil bigger hoodie. But as I said. It's really good pic and I like it. It have just some smoll problems, but when I want, I can't see them. So. That's it. Just try some poses and --- just for me. Try some markers (black enough ) for better look. Thanks for reading that! (Sorry for bad English)

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BinxDiAngelo In reply to Noioo [2017-06-27 15:54:17 +0000 UTC]

Oh wow! Thank you so much for the critique! ^^ I will work on improving those ^^

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Noioo In reply to BinxDiAngelo [2017-06-27 16:46:07 +0000 UTC]

Ahaha! You're welcome! + Okey! ^^ I'm so happy you don't mean it -

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BinxDiAngelo In reply to Noioo [2017-06-27 17:25:43 +0000 UTC]

^^ (slightly confused on the last part of this comment)

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Noioo In reply to BinxDiAngelo [2017-06-27 17:28:43 +0000 UTC]

Sorry I mean -Β That you are not upset or angry at me-- ^^

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BinxDiAngelo In reply to Noioo [2017-06-27 17:54:12 +0000 UTC]

Why would I be?

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Noioo In reply to BinxDiAngelo [2017-06-27 18:06:06 +0000 UTC]

Nah. Some people can be mad at some critiques --Β 

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BinxDiAngelo In reply to Noioo [2017-06-27 18:11:54 +0000 UTC]

oh really? then why would they ask for them?

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Drragonette [2017-06-29 01:06:47 +0000 UTC]

Β I did it ! 'u'Β 

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