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FNAF1234FBFC [2020-05-14 09:46:34 +0000 UTC]
I like it
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StretchM3 [2017-05-10 01:26:28 +0000 UTC]
Oh man I wonder what happens next !
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Biobasher In reply to StretchM3 [2017-05-10 12:34:22 +0000 UTC]
Find out next time on dragon ba... wait wrong series.
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Zeuzi [2017-05-05 02:49:15 +0000 UTC]
Puddles have feelings tooΒ Β
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Biobasher In reply to Zeuzi [2017-05-05 20:00:37 +0000 UTC]
They do, or at least, some do.
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Ogihci2 [2017-05-05 00:26:05 +0000 UTC]
I can't wait to see what her revenge with be like. X3
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Biobasher In reply to Ogihci2 [2017-05-05 00:50:39 +0000 UTC]
As a dungeon master, I can think of many a ways *insert evil laughter here*
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Kai-Chronaius [2017-05-05 00:07:23 +0000 UTC]
She's got some 'splainin' to do
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Sheepy-Drackzahn [2017-05-04 21:22:00 +0000 UTC]
Nice story till here. I am curius how it will go on^^.
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Lacarb In reply to Sheepy-Drackzahn [2017-05-04 23:09:16 +0000 UTC]
Nice story man! I'm never found a story like these about a Slime Girl
It's so cool!
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Biobasher In reply to Sheepy-Drackzahn [2017-05-04 21:24:41 +0000 UTC]
There's gonna be fighting and bloodshed within the story, and it's going to be a rather long story once the whole thing is done, this here is only chapter 1. I don't intend to have any harm come to the child though obviously, it'd probably be a prank or something where she forms infront of him freaking him out. Or dropping a bucket of water on his head.
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Sheepy-Drackzahn In reply to Biobasher [2017-05-04 21:47:12 +0000 UTC]
Slimegirl story with an bloody fight? sound nice.
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Biobasher In reply to Sheepy-Drackzahn [2017-05-04 21:48:06 +0000 UTC]
Probably feel sick if she absorbs it to be honest xD, though it does give me an idea for her powers.
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Biobasher In reply to Sheepy-Drackzahn [2017-05-04 22:13:26 +0000 UTC]
Possibly, I was thinking along the lines of absorbing DNA would likely make her sick for a time but give her the ability to shift into that person's form. I wasn't expecting more slimegirls for a while but it's a thought.
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Sheepy-Drackzahn In reply to Biobasher [2017-05-04 22:59:33 +0000 UTC]
Absorbing persons and steak their identity, their look. Interesting^^.Β
What your slime can do and what not is your decision, but an idea: What if she find a person she begins to like and that person is wounded. You said that your story will have blood in it. Maybe she could save her through absorption and transormation in an slime?
Only a thought^^.
First i will look forward on how her mother will react to her and what she will do from here on.Β
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