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BitterGrapes β Opus 329
Published: 2006-05-19 19:53:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 756; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 35
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i loved herin this place
in the after.
her lips
indelible on mine
her smallness memorized
into my chest.
goodbye is a
soft dirge
a breathless ache
a solitary ride
until we meet again.
(Eastbound blue line, Chicago IL 03/29/2006)
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Thank you, Helmy. This one was very special to me. At the time, it felt kind of like a ghost town.
Thanks for the fave too, my friend.
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You're welcome Moses. It looks like it's going to be mine as well but it's hard to explain why. I feel like attracted to it the moment I saw it. So why is it yours? Relates to any memorious day I presume.
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Indeed. The picture was the aftermath of an afternoon spent with a lovely lady. Getting ready to ride all the way back across town alone.
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youre welcome ^_^
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The lighting is incredible, how did you get this effect? Awesome shot.
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Actually I used the built in flash, and then adjusted the contrast and curves slightly. Thank you!
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Thank you! And thanks again for the fave.
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The words make me sad, but the photo makes me happy.
Wish we had subways in Florida. But then the whole state'd sink.
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LOL...you are funny!!!
I'm glad the photo makes you happy...and the words make you sad too...then you could feel what I wanted you to.
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great shot
love the lighting. i love the glow
great tones
nice compostion
good work
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Thanks a lot, man. I'm glad you enjoyed!
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your quite welcome mate!
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Ok. I am officially changing the name of this piece to Magnum Opus 329.I am speechless. The poem and photo are excellent. Her lips indelible on mine, what a way to describe a kiss. Goodbye is a soft dirge, Platinum! Comparing the absence for your lover to a mournful composition, this line embodies the definition of romance. The lighting and focus used in this shot is Pure Genius! I'm not worthy.
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Aww see. You gets a big
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I like this shot. reminds me of the public transportation of my youth
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Do they have L trains in LA?
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both the poem and photograph completely suit each other. seriously, beautiful.
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Thank you Q, I'm glad you like this. Thank you for the favorite on 'Glass and Steel'. 
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YouΒ΄re always welcome, my friend
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The picture and the poem fits nicely.. well done
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Thanks much, my friend.
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The best bus shot I've seen so far. You better yourself each time.
once again, the words are delicious.
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Thank you! That is really encouraging. I've ridden the L train for years and always wanted to photograph it. Here's an interesting story. Last week, I was going into the subway and I snapped a picture. As I was heading down the stairs, the security said, "You can't take pictures of equipment. You can shoot people, but not equipment." So I was like, "Well, I can't shoot people either unless they want to be shot...what's the deal with not taking pics of equipment?" This sista tells me, "Well we don't know. You could be Taliban."
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LOL
there aren't trains and buses down here, and hell if the workers even know what the taliban is.
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I think that worker didn't know where what the taliban was. LOL
No trains or buses, eh?
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Thank you! This one was kind of a happy accident. I'd just gotten the camera. I'd taken 39 shots of this train car, and this was lucky #40...coincidentally the last one.
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Many thanks. I can see you like words too.
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My old band was called blue line metro.
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