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lksugui [2011-02-13 16:47:04 +0000 UTC]
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Oookay... (deep breath), here I go. Once again, warning that I'm not a pro or anything so my critique is based purely on the few things I learned from an art course I had long time ago and personal experience.
That said, let's start with the awesome lighting. You're really good at it, and it's becoming part of your style, go you! I especially like the symbols shining on their swords, very impressive.
You also improved the nose line of your characters, congrats! Clothing, acessories, weaponry, they all look good and match your drawing style pretty well.
The only thing to point out would be the rocks at the background, but you have already apologized for them e.deviantart.net/emoticons/x/xā¦ " width="15" height="15" alt="" title="XD"/> Anyways, if you allow me a suggestion, try a different texture for the rocks, or maybe combine two or three layers of different textures with low oppacity (if you're working on Photoshop, that is). Add some more cracks and give the borders the same lighting effect you're using on the characters, only a little less bright.
Overall, it's a lovely work and you did visibly improve your art. Congratulations and keep it up! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/c/cā¦ " width="20" height="20" alt="" title="Clap"/>
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BookWormMK [2013-05-17 21:26:02 +0000 UTC]
I'm going through your stuff again because you have all this awesome fanart for all my favorites (Abhorsen, Icemark, HP, Discworld...) and I've actually caught up on them all (except for Icemark) and I just had to say- isn't this scene great? It makes you feel that the ending isn't a 'surprise, they're in love'.
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Jelzie [2013-01-07 11:48:08 +0000 UTC]
Well, the reservoir is meant to be dark. Good job!
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Jelzie In reply to BlackMage339 [2013-02-01 16:54:16 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, I hate computer problems. The internet can be infuriating, sometimes it has to be restarted 4 times a day, so I can't be on as often.
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10qwertyuiop10 In reply to BlackMage339 [2012-12-12 00:38:09 +0000 UTC]
I don't color anything at all, so you're one up on me. XD
Thankee kindly. Ehehehehe
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Gothic-Wolfie [2011-07-03 17:17:33 +0000 UTC]
wow o.o awesome! I love how you've done the lighting and the marks on the swords
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BlackMage339 In reply to Jen-trevellan [2011-02-11 18:02:13 +0000 UTC]
I loved them too, and they never seem to deteriorate (unlike some books I fondly remember only to find an unpleasant and badly-written surprise within) - Garth Nix is such an original writer!
Thanks, I used to laugh when she first finds him and there's this sudden description of how muscular and good looking he is XD
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BudgieFace [2011-02-10 19:45:37 +0000 UTC]
This really made me think of the scene in Tales of the dark Forrest ( I can't remember which one) where Rose and... the boy... have ot to go through a scary cave :L Not sure why.
Eeee I really love the shiny yellow on their faces, and the expressions are so great.
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BlackMage339 In reply to BudgieFace [2011-02-11 18:00:53 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, glad you like the light - I like to put glowing things in somewhere XD Anywhere. Everywhere. I don't think I've heard of that, is it a book?
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BlackMage339 In reply to Sleyf [2011-02-11 18:04:09 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, it was a pain trying to get the balance right - my laptop always shows things lighter and brighter than they really are. See, if only you hadn't gotten bored you too would have been subjected to Touchstone's loveliness! XD I feel like you're stealing all my boys XD
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BlackMage339 In reply to Sleyf [2011-02-13 20:40:37 +0000 UTC]
Ah, yes, I have broken the spine of my copy of Sabriel from rereading a bit in the reservoir that makes me go "Awww..." and then make me put the book away if I'm on a train so I can read it in a cosy armchair somewhere XD Yeah, he was a figurehead - I always found that scene sort of funny XD
It's confusing, none of them are conventionally handsome, I don't know what I'm doing right XD
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BlackMage339 In reply to Sleyf [2011-02-14 21:10:45 +0000 UTC]
Same XD I have a habit of opening a Terry Pratchett about 1/3 of the way through, reading a sentence and then waiting for read it again when it makes sense - I don't know why I do that.
Then you're much the same as me then XD apparently, as my drawings seem to say.
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BlackMage339 In reply to Sleyf [2011-02-16 20:41:10 +0000 UTC]
I <3 Zombie Lovers XD If I knew how to make stamps I would be making that one right now. Even though it sounds quite...sick. I do have one saving grace though, my favorite guardsman from Discworld (aside from Vimes and Nobby) is Reg Shoe - who can't POSSIBLY die, so I think he's quite safe XD
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Sleyf In reply to BlackMage339 [2011-02-17 09:45:27 +0000 UTC]
Ewwwie...pieces may fall off from time to time...and how could you disguise the smell? (although honestly if something is undead I don't believe it smells as it's body is still...working...if that makes sense?)
Hahaha I always liked Vimes the best, I never had an opinion on Reg really
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BlackMage339 In reply to Sleyf [2011-02-17 15:51:48 +0000 UTC]
Well...if it's getting used and all the proper rituals are observed (mwahahaa) I think that would deal with the smell XD I love how that sounds like warning label "Warning: pieces may fall off from time to time"
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BlackMage339 In reply to Sleyf [2011-02-20 00:12:57 +0000 UTC]
Maybe they'd just howl down the phone at you and offer no help whatsoever XD
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Sleyf In reply to BlackMage339 [2011-02-20 09:36:32 +0000 UTC]
You have to learn zombie speech first and howl back
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BlackMage339 In reply to Hollens [2011-02-11 18:05:15 +0000 UTC]
Thank you - I do practice a lot by putting weird lighting in EVERYWHERE XD Glad you like the cloth especially, after shading all the fiddly intricate bitslike swords and faces I get sort of bored with the cloth and mess it up XD
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Hollens In reply to BlackMage339 [2011-02-11 20:54:14 +0000 UTC]
Well, you did amazing. XD
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