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blackoberst In reply to i4dnf [2005-02-02 21:05:11 +0000 UTC]
emiliane.... u so funny man! but you are right! i should start writing again!
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firelily24 [2004-09-10 17:55:37 +0000 UTC]
I know I'm a random commentor, but I found your name on another's watcher list and decided to check it out. This poem....wow. I don't know if it was what you intended with this piece - but reading it made me feel the rage and confusion that comes with being unable to forget someone who has hurt you. *shrugs* It really touched a chord with me and I thank you.
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~Mercedes
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blackoberst In reply to firelily24 [2004-09-14 06:01:25 +0000 UTC]
yeah... you pretty much sumed it up... 10x for the comment and the fav!
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blackoberst In reply to firelily24 [2004-09-14 06:01:25 +0000 UTC]
yeah... you pretty much sumed it up... 10x for the comment and the fav!
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etpulvis [2004-04-27 04:09:07 +0000 UTC]
I like this a lot. Except for, "Your photos in the gutter, Negatives and all" I would have pictured almost a Fight Club, Indentity kind of inner demons fight. Very cool stuff though. People very rarely realize that love and hate are so closely linked. You cannot truly hate something that you haven't loved, no other emotion is as strong.
Oh, this, along with some of your other, darker work, got me thinking in a gothic kind of mood. I'm going to try my hand at a nightmare scenario.
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blackoberst [2004-04-24 20:06:50 +0000 UTC]
I'm glad, in a way, that you liked it... I whish you didn't know this "so well"... but then again, the true height of happiness cannot be felt until the depths of sorrow are explored... or at least that's my opinion...
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foolishheart [2004-04-24 15:39:11 +0000 UTC]
Your scent – replaced,
Your smile – contorted,
Your taste – bittered,
Your eyes – forgotten.
I know this so well.
This poem really touches me.
Lovely
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infiltrator15 [2004-03-31 10:58:29 +0000 UTC]
nice work! i really like how the most part of the poem is angry and raging, but the last line gives it a sense of calm closure, like a fade-to-black in a movie, and poses a question as well.
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Ashyr [2003-12-28 09:32:38 +0000 UTC]
nah thats all good. cept. it sounds like your refering to an ex girlfriend. aswell as a archenemy. are all villains linked with there nemesis?
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blackoberst In reply to Ashyr [2003-12-28 12:00:34 +0000 UTC]
And is that surprising? One cannot comprehend the full depth of another until one has seen the opposite, the negative, if you will... And this poem WAS supposed to be about an ex-girlfriend (THE ex-girlfriend), although I no longer recognize it as such, it got away from me...
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Ashyr In reply to blackoberst [2003-12-29 06:21:55 +0000 UTC]
good stuff.
thought i picked up something there
_b
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blackoberst [2003-12-27 22:24:57 +0000 UTC]
sorry about that... a little problem with thw server
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blackoberst In reply to cantslowdownkid [2003-12-27 22:23:54 +0000 UTC]
As I said on your page... Thanks for becoming my friend... I'm touched by your comment and I hope I won't let you down with my future work... cya around...
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blackoberst In reply to cantslowdownkid [2003-12-27 22:22:57 +0000 UTC]
As I said on your page... Thanks for becoming my friend... I'm touched by your comment and I hope I won't let you down with my future work... cya around...
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