Comments: 21
Sain-Nayuakuioa [2010-12-21 17:17:42 +0000 UTC]
Fits the description. "Daddy's little showcase . . . To end all Hollywoods, even his" is probably my favorite line. High on the creepy factor, especially if you fill in the gaps.
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Blank-Page-Emperor In reply to Sain-Nayuakuioa [2010-12-26 15:57:49 +0000 UTC]
I love how this, my most-high-school poem, is perhaps my most viewed deviation ever.
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deeptheatrics [2009-05-28 00:04:40 +0000 UTC]
I like the point of view you took on this, an outcast watching another outcast, lurking danger king of thing. It didn't get really creepy until the last two sections, and those were nicely eerie. Good job.
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Tsukamei [2007-09-06 22:02:12 +0000 UTC]
Descriptive if nothing else.
I liked it.
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Blank-Page-Emperor In reply to Tsukamei [2007-09-06 23:22:43 +0000 UTC]
Hooray, you're alive!
If...
Nothing...
Else...
Hmm...
Cryptic. Well, thanks anyway. My pageviews missed you.
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Tsukamei In reply to Blank-Page-Emperor [2007-09-07 20:46:43 +0000 UTC]
hah I'm sorry for the "cryptic" review. I meant to say that (as per logic) this piece is positively dripping with your quite snarky style. It is descriptive and talks about a very dark subject but in this snarky, almost sarcastic, light heartedly murderous voice. If that makes any sense at all . . .If you understood that I'll be even more impressed with your uniqueness than before.
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Tsukamei In reply to Tsukamei [2007-09-07 20:47:50 +0000 UTC]
Of course, I could have heard it in a way that was not your intention. *shrugs*
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Blank-Page-Emperor In reply to Tsukamei [2007-09-08 05:22:10 +0000 UTC]
Oh. Okay. That's fine. I was just wondering if you like... didn't much care for it but were trying to break it softly to me. Feel free to dissent!
I can see how you read it that way, though. It's kinda-sorta like that. It helps that I really did kinda write this from my own perspective, and, therefore, it is quite insane, as am I.
I have a bad tendency to sound sarcastic when I'm serious, and sound serious when I'm being sarcastic. It's hard being me...
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Tsukamei In reply to Blank-Page-Emperor [2007-09-10 00:22:06 +0000 UTC]
lol *shrugs* Well, it was likeable besides all that. Glad the confusion is over with.
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IndigoLillies [2007-09-02 19:49:49 +0000 UTC]
Favorite line:
(That dress has to coordinate
With the color of fear)
You know why I like your poems? I always have to go back and reread them, phobic I've missed some excellent line tucked in there.
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Blank-Page-Emperor In reply to IndigoLillies [2007-09-04 19:12:13 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! I like my poems because I can reread them over and over again and feel really cool.
You there, IndigoLillies:
My ego is now floating aloft, filling several floors of the Helen M. Aderhold Learning Center at GSU. Many, many thanks.
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Blank-Page-Emperor In reply to legacyheir [2007-09-01 08:02:31 +0000 UTC]
Thanks!
And...
Awesome! I will listen to The Black Parade as soon as possible, then. I've already heard "Welcome," "Teenagers", "Cancer," and "I Don't Love You." So I've got a start. What'd you think of Cities? I like tracks five and six, "The Unwinding Cable Car" and "There Is No Mathematics To Love And Loss."
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legacyheir In reply to Blank-Page-Emperor [2007-09-03 02:30:31 +0000 UTC]
It was a good album, but I have to go back and relisten... as with all albums, first time through, I can't remember individual songs... they all run together...
Stupid brain.
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ShadowtheRipper [2007-08-28 21:06:12 +0000 UTC]
I love this.
I actually... wow.
I'm showing this to my English teachers from this year and last.
...If that's ok with you.
<3
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Blank-Page-Emperor In reply to ShadowtheRipper [2007-08-29 01:19:40 +0000 UTC]
Sure, go 'head. *belches* I'd be honored.
THIS IS WHY I'M HOT.
By the way, I appreciate you not giving me too much trouble about yer songeh-thingeh. I assure that I'm working on the concept right now, but it's gonna be a bit. Darned college...
I only logged in to DA to say that I'm likely going to throw in the towel on a contest by that I entered at the beginning of the month and am still nowhere near being ready for, so you can guess that I'm... BUSY.
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ShadowtheRipper In reply to Blank-Page-Emperor [2007-08-29 22:01:34 +0000 UTC]
Ah, I figure you'll write it when you can.
And if you never do it, the thought's appreciated.
XD
Luffs for you!
<3
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Blank-Page-Emperor In reply to ShadowtheRipper [2007-08-30 05:28:42 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for the reprieve. I'm totally working on the guitar parts right now, just because I feel I ought to. Right now it's something hot 'n heavy like when we...
...well...
...like Killswitch Engage.
I wasn't going to say something else. What makes you think I was going to? You speak craziness!
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