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Blank-Page-Emperor — Boys with Long Hair
Published: 2007-08-26 20:02:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 781; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 2
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Description I sometimes observe the two of them
Or one, and then the other
I recall glances unsent
The subtle, choreographed ignorance
All feigned, mind you
(And your manners!
Don’t stare!)

Forget me not, I say
Forget to forget me, right?
What I once was, only I wasn’t
Except to me
But no matter
She’s got skin like the movies
And facades to match
(That dress has to coordinate
With the color of fear)

But looking at him
I wonder when the whole thing will clash
He doesn’t see the colors
He’s got no eyes
Not real ones, to be sure
The ubiquitous bad-boy
White Anglo-Saxon Persecution, to be sure
No hesitation, just preparation
The stuff of day-nightmares
(The goods ones that make you shiver
To be sure, oh-so-sure)

So I watch this interchange
Day after die-long day
Knowing full well
That legs are never too long
To follow all the way
To their inevitable conclusion
Sprawled not in the back seat of a car
But in the dirt of a roadside gulley
Where that car may very well have stopped
Oh horrors!  Their “eyes” meet
Furtive passion without thought
(Places everyone!
We’re going to have a little improvisation!)

Daddy’s little showcase
The high-school bombshell
To end all Hollywoods, even his
She’s watching him, and he knows
Remember how I said that he has no eyes?
I wasn’t kidding
He hears with hidden ears
And does the rest with his mind
But he has no real eyes,
Baby blue as they may be
(Make the collision happen fast
We must have hopelessness!)

She can’t deny that
She likes boys like him
The bad kind
Boys with long hair
Because that ought to make a difference
Right?
He’ll take what he can devour
(It makes sense
And, occasionally, headlines)

What she doesn’t know
Can’t let her go on living
What she doesn’t know
Just me and him
Boys with long hair
Too little
Too late
Too bad

Get in the car.
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Comments: 21

Sain-Nayuakuioa [2010-12-21 17:17:42 +0000 UTC]

Fits the description. "Daddy's little showcase . . . To end all Hollywoods, even his" is probably my favorite line. High on the creepy factor, especially if you fill in the gaps.

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Blank-Page-Emperor In reply to Sain-Nayuakuioa [2010-12-26 15:57:49 +0000 UTC]

I love how this, my most-high-school poem, is perhaps my most viewed deviation ever.

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deeptheatrics [2009-05-28 00:04:40 +0000 UTC]

I like the point of view you took on this, an outcast watching another outcast, lurking danger king of thing. It didn't get really creepy until the last two sections, and those were nicely eerie. Good job.

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Blank-Page-Emperor In reply to deeptheatrics [2009-05-28 03:36:10 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

Glad I have a poem people actually can understand.

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Tsukamei [2007-09-06 22:02:12 +0000 UTC]

Descriptive if nothing else.
I liked it.

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Blank-Page-Emperor In reply to Tsukamei [2007-09-06 23:22:43 +0000 UTC]

Hooray, you're alive!

If...

Nothing...

Else...

Hmm...

Cryptic. Well, thanks anyway. My pageviews missed you.

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Tsukamei In reply to Blank-Page-Emperor [2007-09-07 20:46:43 +0000 UTC]

hah I'm sorry for the "cryptic" review. I meant to say that (as per logic) this piece is positively dripping with your quite snarky style. It is descriptive and talks about a very dark subject but in this snarky, almost sarcastic, light heartedly murderous voice. If that makes any sense at all . . .If you understood that I'll be even more impressed with your uniqueness than before.

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Tsukamei In reply to Tsukamei [2007-09-07 20:47:50 +0000 UTC]

Of course, I could have heard it in a way that was not your intention. *shrugs*

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Blank-Page-Emperor In reply to Tsukamei [2007-09-08 05:22:10 +0000 UTC]

Oh. Okay. That's fine. I was just wondering if you like... didn't much care for it but were trying to break it softly to me. Feel free to dissent!

I can see how you read it that way, though. It's kinda-sorta like that. It helps that I really did kinda write this from my own perspective, and, therefore, it is quite insane, as am I.

I have a bad tendency to sound sarcastic when I'm serious, and sound serious when I'm being sarcastic. It's hard being me...

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Tsukamei In reply to Blank-Page-Emperor [2007-09-10 00:22:06 +0000 UTC]

lol *shrugs* Well, it was likeable besides all that. Glad the confusion is over with.

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Blank-Page-Emperor In reply to Tsukamei [2007-09-10 03:41:32 +0000 UTC]

Hurrah!

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IndigoLillies [2007-09-02 19:49:49 +0000 UTC]

Favorite line:
(That dress has to coordinate
With the color of fear)

You know why I like your poems? I always have to go back and reread them, phobic I've missed some excellent line tucked in there.

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Blank-Page-Emperor In reply to IndigoLillies [2007-09-04 19:12:13 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I like my poems because I can reread them over and over again and feel really cool.

You there, IndigoLillies:

My ego is now floating aloft, filling several floors of the Helen M. Aderhold Learning Center at GSU. Many, many thanks.

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legacyheir [2007-08-31 00:48:17 +0000 UTC]

NICE!!!
Oh, btw, I DID finally listen to the Anberlin CD

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Blank-Page-Emperor In reply to legacyheir [2007-09-01 08:02:31 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

And...

Awesome! I will listen to The Black Parade as soon as possible, then. I've already heard "Welcome," "Teenagers", "Cancer," and "I Don't Love You." So I've got a start. What'd you think of Cities? I like tracks five and six, "The Unwinding Cable Car" and "There Is No Mathematics To Love And Loss."

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legacyheir In reply to Blank-Page-Emperor [2007-09-03 02:30:31 +0000 UTC]

It was a good album, but I have to go back and relisten... as with all albums, first time through, I can't remember individual songs... they all run together...
Stupid brain.

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ShadowtheRipper [2007-08-28 21:06:12 +0000 UTC]

I love this.
I actually... wow.
I'm showing this to my English teachers from this year and last.
...If that's ok with you.
<3

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Blank-Page-Emperor In reply to ShadowtheRipper [2007-08-29 01:19:40 +0000 UTC]

Sure, go 'head. *belches* I'd be honored.

THIS IS WHY I'M HOT.

By the way, I appreciate you not giving me too much trouble about yer songeh-thingeh. I assure that I'm working on the concept right now, but it's gonna be a bit. Darned college...

I only logged in to DA to say that I'm likely going to throw in the towel on a contest by that I entered at the beginning of the month and am still nowhere near being ready for, so you can guess that I'm... BUSY.

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ShadowtheRipper In reply to Blank-Page-Emperor [2007-08-29 22:01:34 +0000 UTC]

Ah, I figure you'll write it when you can.
And if you never do it, the thought's appreciated.
XD
Luffs for you!
<3

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Blank-Page-Emperor In reply to ShadowtheRipper [2007-08-30 05:28:42 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the reprieve. I'm totally working on the guitar parts right now, just because I feel I ought to. Right now it's something hot 'n heavy like when we...

...well...

...like Killswitch Engage.

I wasn't going to say something else. What makes you think I was going to? You speak craziness!

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ShadowtheRipper In reply to Blank-Page-Emperor [2007-08-30 23:19:28 +0000 UTC]

>//>
Don't do that.
XD;;;
You flatter me, Sam.
>3>

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