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Published: 2019-01-16 07:11:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 654; Favourites: 34; Downloads: 0
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Never drew him before and I loved his character design..
I wanna start a series of drawing characters I've never drawn before.
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"Got it Memorized?" another artwork featuring my Dearly Beloved Kingdom Hearts. :]
In all honestly, I say that the art style kind of reminds me of the Manga series The Promised Neverland, which I have never actually seen mind you (nor do intend to), however, because it was featured in Weekly Shonen Jump, I think it deserved a quick glance at best.
As for the artwork itself, it looks like it is portraying a young looking Axel who is still a daredevil as ever and is just starting out in Organization XIII after his Human self, Lea, became the Nobody that Axel is now.
It's not 100% percent perfect but I feel like from looking at it, it gets a purpose done, something like that.
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Didn't know what you meant by the "Promised Neverland", because I never heard of it, but I don't see, or understand the similarities part. You can see two different types of art styles. Mine isn't as, gritty with harder strokes. In all honesty his/ her art style is more like the "Seven Deadly Sins".
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Didn't quite understand the last bit. Wasn't going for a 100% but I'm glad you shared that in case I revisit the character again, I'll have something to look forward to improving.
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Thanks for taking time out for the critique!
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I like it! But it is stretched just a little too much, so it would make for an excellent phone wallpaper if bought without the watermark. I also feel that the watermark doesn't let people use it for themselves, which would get less views and stuff. Also, making his body go all the way down to the bottom of the art would make it nicer too, as if it was a portrait. All in all, you did okay and with those little tweaks, it'll be even better! So long! I'm all done. And don't forget, keep up the good work!
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Thank you for the critique. I'm sorry to say that some of it was hard to understand. I'm gonna try to though! I don't have this piece for sale and I understand the watermark issue. That's been up for debate in the art community for a few years now and how it contributes to lack of views and lower interactions. However I'm still a new artist and I can't have people stealing/ not crediting my work and running off claiming it you know? Hopefully when I, hopefully, become more known and my work becomes more familiar to people I won't have to worry about that.. I appreciate the idea of groping the piece and mailing it look more like portrait instead of a half person floating in the middle of the piece and that's definitely something that I will work on with future pieces. Even more so, I appreciate your honest critique and how you feel about this piece. It gives me a little more of something to take into consideration when working on future projects!
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the colors really stand out against all the great and black, and the detail to the eyes are really amazing!!!me as a devoted kingdom hearts fan think this looks amazing! but one hing i have to say is that the top of the piece is a little blank, the hair is up there but all the little "flames" are not there either making it a little blank up there. but the hair really pulls all of it together! =^-^=
my favorite part has to be the attention to detail on his cape/dress/hoodie! i just love it so much! keep up the good work!
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Thank you so much for taking time out for critiquing this piece! I appreciate your love for the character, as well as your honesty. I can see how the top does look a bit bland in comparison to the other parts of the piece and detail is so etching that I strive to work on. Thanks again and I appreciate the sharp eye, it helps me to train myself to have a better eye for the pieces to come. Thank you!! 😊😊
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=^-^= happy to help!!!
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Axel looks really young in this piece, like 12 years old.
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