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BlazeRocket — Evo Everlasting 016
Published: 2008-01-09 19:25:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 4842; Favourites: 35; Downloads: 38
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If I had any sort of integrity, I would have drawn the piles of snow pushed up against those windows. I didn't. Because I'm LAZY.Scott makes expressions. They exist. They happen. On his face. Really.
Still working on that "Crossed Arms" thing. I'll get it. Some day. >.>
Not much to say. Tried to draw powers happening again. It's harder than it should be. Feh.
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Soory for favebombing! Once i realized i was doing it i started faving ONLY the ones i REALLY like. I like the last panel, Scott's perspective rocks!
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Thanks! I appreciate you realizing it, and stopping. I really do! 
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Whoooaaaa, I'm loving the perspective. Look at what this comic is dragging out of you - so many nifty things.
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'S'okay, the snow got melted by another hilarious highly destructive mutant snowball fight, along with one of Scott's car's tires and probably most of the shrubbery.
Powers in action are difficult to draw. It sucks. But you pulled it off quite clearly without resorting to the old "fingers to the temples look ma I's using my mind powahs" standby, which is wonderful. Plus with a comic you don't have the benefit of warbly telekinetic background sounds, so it makes sense to put the little visual marker by her head.
Scott cracks me up in the last panel. He's totally all like "haha, yeah, those Brotherhood punks are totally not as amazing and chivalrous as I! Where do you want your gloves, muffin?" And Jean just. doesn't. care.
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Hee, their interactions feel very real. I really like their body posture in that last panel. It's nice and feels so casual. The crossed arms look good! I like Scott's crossed arms. I especially like how his wrist kind of bends down. It kind of makes it look like he's about to uncross his arms, which he IS when he takes Jean's gloves! 
That is SUCH a cool perspective in that middle panel. Since the two of them were just having a casual conversation, it wouldn't have been very interesting to just show regular face shot after face shot, and I think it's cool that you kind of spiced it up with that different perspective. This is a great page! I hope you get to the next one soon!!
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Love your perspective in the second panel. Love, love, love it. I love how Jean and Scott commiserate over her being thrown out. Hilarious. Excellent placement of the speech bubbles in that 2nd panel! Really covers up the negative space on the left side.
I wish there were a few more objects in the 2nd panel. I also kind wish the left angle of the floor line was altered to be more of a 90 degree than a 45. Does that make sense?
Really nice though. I like Jean and Scott's interactions. Awww he takes her glove. Now, now, Jean, Scott isn't your coat rack...he's your door mat. *rimshot*
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It really does make sense, actually. All the pics I pulled of the mansion have that main entrance room as sort of a pentagon or something, so I tried to keep it that shape, but it does make for a sort of ... awkward look.
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