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BlazeRocket — Evo Everlasting 072
Published: 2010-02-06 15:29:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 3646; Favourites: 25; Downloads: 12
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Hoowag. These pages are taking a long time to do. I's learning to draw cars!
Also: Trying to lessen my dependency on rulers. I only used them for the borders, and on the buildings in the first panel. This page got pretty word heavy. Hopefully it's clear who's saying what, but it doesn't particular matter if it's not =_=
For some reason, I think Scott looks like Doc Ock in the fourth panel.
Sam, Roberto and Rahne don't have canon winter outfits, so I made them up, based on other Evo outfits
Yuuup.
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In the second panel, it's "I'mma PUNCH you if you don't knock that off!" expression.
In the last panel it's a resigned exasperation type expression. "Just make it through the day, Crisp... Just make it through the day."
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I have to say that I absolutely love how you draw Ray. He's my fav so it's great to see him from time to time.
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wow, Ray has some gorgeously drawn face in the last panel.
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i swear to god- if that stick were wedged any further up his ass , he'd be coughing up sharpened pencils XD
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Blaze, dearest, lovely to see another page from you. And a delightful switch of subject matter between panels instead of just showing the same two characters over and over. It's a great way to show stuff going on without keep showing the same things over and over. I also really like the perspective in the first panel, a little funky on the car in back and in some spots, but generally it looks good.
It's a very slow-moving page, which isn't a bad thing, just an observation. The flow of the speech bubbles reminds me of slowly drifting snowflakes. Kind of cool. In the second panel, there's a bit of a problem with perspective in that we're seeing the rear view mirror dead on, but have a rather high view of the road, almost bird's eye. A slightly higher angle wouldn't be inappropriate, but I feel like the viewer is floating above it. It might be better from a straight on flat, level view. I understand the want to change up the angle though.
Also on that rear view mirror, Jamie's arm is a little weird. I think his forearm is too long and the bicep is too short. Jamie's left eye (his left our right) is sliding a little high on his face and the heads of the three boys are varying a bit in size. Ray's seems a little small and Sam's is a little big...or at least it seems that way...might just be Ray's head or one of those optical illusion things....
Scott's head in the fourth panel is not wrong but it's a little off of Scott. I think it might be too long...maybe? I'm not sure...long and thin maybe? Gah, well, it's fine in general, but not totally Scott-looking. Okay, bad point, not expressing that well.
I, actually, knew who was saying what. This was kind of from just monitoring the flow of conversation, and generally knowing who was in who's car. It wasn't really a problem for me at least.
I love Ray's face in the last panel, he's so dejected. I am so happy to see another page! Change their lives for the better, Jean? Oh, you believe that don't you...yeah...yeah...WHATEVS. 
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Jamie = Bobby, actually ^_^
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I thought you did, cuz I KNOW we've talked about it XD
Anyway. Bobby, Jamie, SAME DIFF ALL NEW RECRUITS ANYWAY.
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i'm pretty sure i could tell who was saying what; but i can see how it would get confusing. maybe if there are a lot of scenes like this in the future, you could use a different font. not like for every character, 'cause that would be ridiculous. but maybe you could have a set "telepathy font" that only the telepaths use, or something. i mean, it would still be confusing w/ jean and the professor... ah well, forget i said anything. :facepalm:
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My actual idea would be to have the bubbles tinted a particular colour, depending on who was speaking, but that, of course, would requrie colour...
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and that's a whole other can of worms. hmmm. i'm sure a solution will present itself eventually.
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well you did great for your first time without rulers
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Oh my, a dillema. I hope this doesn't lead to one of Scott's Brilliant Plans.
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What abut one of Jean's?
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Oh, those ones are usually OK. At least, they're less prone to utter and hilarious failure.
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yays another page!!
I love the way ur drawings look very similar to Steven Gordon's
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I envy you and your perspective.
I have NO idea who is saying what, but you're right, I don't know that it matters. They idea is the same either way.
Your cars are pretty 
I...don't know if I like where this is going or not. Can you change the brotherhood without them darn well feeling like it?
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