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Published: 2009-08-21 08:09:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 5118; Favourites: 52; Downloads: 38
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JESUS CHRIST BANANAS.Uhm. what? oh. This. 9.6
Well, after my last failed attempt at a double-page spread, I have TRIED AGAIN, and this time with... more success? I guess.
This page has a LOT of issues. There seem to be at least 3 separate perspectives all in play at the same time. Only one person at the table actually have legs. I don't even KNOW where the rest of Freddy is. The back counter is too low, the cabinets are too high... ALL IS MADNESS.
Still. I'm a might proud of the effort for this.
Originally Beast was in on this action, but... I'm afraid he didn't make it.
Also, Chuck? There is NO EXCUSE for having a cord phone. You have REMODELED already. Having a corded phone is just CHEAPNESS on your part. Upgraaaaaade!
Uhm. Yeah. MADNESS. Possibly more comments soon. MUST SUBMIT NAOW.
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So... if Jamie's dupes eat, when he calls them back/reabsorbs them, does he get extra full/have over eaten? Also, I'm sure multiple Jamies are not helping the school's food bill XD
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Who's the person on the phone, or where is everyone... I'm so confused.
But I loved the entire comic so far, still reading them.
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Who's the person on the phone OR where is everyone?
I chose option A, as option B is too long to write out. Sam Guthrie is on the phone.
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That's what I thought, I won't put you through misery to write it all out, so yeah, THANKS!
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Kurt's already scripted to be in more pages, hold yer horses 9_9
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I have no horses to hold -.-
But I shall try to be patient.
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Well, there's an entire little side-story line for him coming up. I just have to get to it... I think it'll start in another... threeee pages? I think? Give or take. Somewhere around Page 75. <_<
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*commence fangirl-y squealing*
You're awesome, you know that?
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I have some slight knowledge of the fact, but I try to keep it on the DL, for modesty's sake XD
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HO! Anyone who can fit that many characters into one scene deserves mucho praise /worship
(I think I'd quite enjoy the chaos of said kitchen....)
((L)only child)
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First of all, wow. Wow-ity-wow wow. Anyone drawing 20 characters in a scene all interacting with one another deserves a medal...or something. Especially when all those characters are also recognizable...EVEN FROM BEHIND. Thought, planning, and patience went into this. Brava. You should be extremely proud.
I am, however, critiquing this, and because of this fact, I am now going to nitpick. FEEL FREE TO BE FREAKIN' PROUD BECAUSE YOU SHOULD BE, but...critique. There's a lot of wonkiness with arms in this one: Ray's arm doesn't look well connected to his body, Toad's hand ends in a rather funky way under the butter dish, the talking-to-Bobby-Jamie's arm is a little Olive-Oil-in-trouble-ish, Lance's right arm needs more roundness to it, Scott has a severe case of claw-hand, Roberto's arms are too long, Rahne is suffering from accute mitten hands syndrome, and Kitty's stretched arm could use a little slendering at the the wrist. Now, instead of just calling you out, here are suggestions:
Ray: Bring the shoulder in closer to the body. I know you have a tendency for broad shoulders, but bringing it in just the slightest bit will help. That, and shortening the bicep.
Toad: Give him a thumb over part of the top of the butter dish and tilt the dish more so it's on an angle as though something under it. (Side note: It's really hard to tell that's a frog on his head. A more defined frog-shaped outline would help. YES, cheap. But clarity wins out most times over cheapness...not...that...knowing that the pet is there is NECESSARY, but a fun tidbit that should be more easily recognized).
Bobby-Jamie: I think the forearm-hand just needs to be re-done. I'm having a hard time putting it into words. Sorry. :<
Lance: The elbow comes to such a sharp point and angle. Rounding out the bicep will give it definition (WHICH WE KNOW HE HAS mm-MM). Just use a curved line to get to the point of the elbow.
Scott: Just add more fingers or make the knuckles of other fingers more visible.
Roberto: Just harping on you for shorter biceps again.
Rahne: Same as Scott. Just make lines to indicate knuckles/other fingers.
Kitty: ...I pretty much explained it. Slender forearm into wrist.
Also, Fred is probably TOO big. He reminds me a bit of the Ghost of Christmas Present. COME IN, AND KNOW ME BETTER, MAN. He should be a LITTLE smaller. Yes, Fred is HUGE, but he shouldn't be a GIANT.
There seems to be some perspective trouble with the diners on the right side of the table. They seem to have well-proportioned upper bodies that "V" into tiny bottom halves that are too close to the floor. This is a tricky issue to solve, but lengthening all legs (chair, table, and human) will help feel like they're not all at the kiddie-table.
Also, objects on the table/counters should have the same vanishing point as the tables and counters themselves. It's not TERRIBLE with this page, but I noticed that the bowl of fruit Sam is reaching for and the juice glass on the counter with the stove are not perspectively correct. We should see INSIDE of them. Freddy's bowl of porridge/oatmeal/grits/grinded-mens'-bones-to-make-his-bread also has this issue.
Another point to make, watch line weight as all the characters and objects seem to be the same thickness...it's REALLY easy to get lost in here. This MAY be the point, but I think the drawings itself give off madness enough that you can make it more navigate-able madness with more appropriate lines.
Regardless, the image has the impact you were looking for. Chaotic. The details are wonderful that you chose what everyone would eat, what they would be saying, who they would be sitting with (THERE IS NO ROOM AT THAT TABLE FOR YOU KURT. NOBODY LEFT YOU A CHAIR)...the thought put into it is fantastic. It's also great to see almost ALL EVO CHARACTERS together in one place. It's...epic. Epic is the word. Once again, brava to you. You should be SO PROUD of yourself.
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Do continue please. This is a most well-done and interesting comic. :Clap: I wish I could draw that well...
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HOLY CRAP.
I forgot to comment on this? D:
Seriously, punch me in the mouth.
This is an AWESOME page. <3 I like how everything came out, devinitley. <3 Haaah, I always have a bit of hard time with group pictures. 
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This is freakin' BRILLIANT. That is LITERALLY what I thought when I saw this. The details are fantastarific and the fact that you have an ENORMOUS cast of near 20 people (4 of which are Jamie but still) is MIND BLOWING. I love how everyone is still recognizable, even with their bedheads. I could honestly look at this all freakin' day. There's a real sense of commotion going on and the conversations are just perfect.
The art by itself is clean and REALLY well done. Like...this could be in a BOOK well done. Like, I could print this out and give this to the kids I babysit and they could color it well done. And, though I'm not art major, your perspective looks pretty SPOT ON. WHICH I COULD NEVER HOPE TO DO IN A SCENE WITH THIS MANY PEOPLE AND THIS MUCH DETAIL. So...bottom line: You fuckin' rock. And I'm going to finish Bobby's gossip too:
Bobby:"...a skeleton!"
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... Just wanted to say 
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I can't say I blame Spike for wanting to miss out on such a chaotic event.
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Holy Queen of the Cheese World!!!! This is kick arse!!!!! Hell... a part of me wants to start drawing XME again.
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Dooo it. Draws it. You know you wants it. *hypno-eyes*
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I did... and I also found some old sketches when I was remodeling parts of the house... I might clean 'em up a bit and put them on.
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xD I thought Lance was in two places at once and then I realized that it was Cannonball on the phone xD
looks great, very very busy @.@
~Wits
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It's all about the mullet, baby.
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heck ya >3> haha
~Wits
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Yesss.... Sam has a pointer nose than Lance, but the detail got lost in the distance. So without colour, and without their normal clothing (because their normal clothing is SO DIFFERENT from each other) they're reeeeeeeeally easy to mix up ^_^;
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xD haha ya, I hadn't realized that till now, but sall good, it's still able to be interpreted right cuz of the situations, since i don't think Lance would ever talk to his mom on Xavier's phone, or even answer the call >3> xD
~Wits
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Well, with the whole foster family thing, I dun think he HAS a mum....
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ohh true >.o d'oh lol
~Wits
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Four! Four Jamies! Ah! Ah! Ahhhh!
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i just just maltiple, all of them.
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right out of norman rockwell , i swear XD
praytell WHAT exactly is in the closet?.....
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Probably nowhere near as exciting as you and I are hoping.
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THAT would be telling ^.^
Though the real question might be- why was Bobby IN the closet in the first place. XD
... Which I'm ALSO not telling
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I can already guess .i work for a sex shop ..some of the cheapest stuff is INEVITABLY the most wierd , too XD
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GOOD GOD OxO
That must have been a pain to draw, And that must be a crampt kitchen xD
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Waaa~ I love this series! I found it one night at about two in the morning and read it all in one go! This picture is so chaotic! (That's probably why I love it so much) But it wouldn't be so crowded if Jamie didn't need four people to eat breakfast! I can't wait for another!
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I'm so glad you're enjoying it. And I'm glad it's chaotic! I was trying really hard to make this picture as busy as possible... I think it could have probably been busier, but it's not bad.
I think Jamie could give Kurt a run for his money in the eating department. Someone just needs to keep an eye on him and make sure he only eats ONCE per meal. XD but yeah... I assume it takes a some energy to duplicate one's self entirely, so yeah... he's a little black hole ^.^
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