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BlazeRocket — Evo Everlasting 079
Published: 2011-01-25 18:35:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 3806; Favourites: 24; Downloads: 8
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... And then, four months later, Blaze finally put up another page of EE.And not even a very good one at that. DOES ANYONE EVEN REMEMBER WHAT'S GOING ON?
Seriously, though, I'm not terribly happy with this page, but I sort of need to start updating again, so.... ENJOY SUB PAR QUALITY, Y'ALL!
Before anyone asks, that's kitty in the second panel. She crimped her hair >_____>
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So, next day, and rereading the entire comic is done, and with that done, I thought I'd give an actual review.
The story, I just have to say, is surprisingly addicting and entertaining. I say 'surprisingly' because, when it comes right down to it, not much action wise or even comedy wise seems to happen. The first chapter, and the interlude, and most of this second chapter runs like a kind of 'day in the life' story. You don't have the characters running around doing goofy adventures or fighting (except that one time) at the drop of a pin because your showing off their normal, everyday problems, like what happens when they run out of money and have to swallow their pride to survive. And, honestly, it's fascinating, and I think this can be attributed to how you pace your stories. You take your time with your scenes, even the ones that bore or frustrate you, in order to fully explore the situation, however mundane it may be, for whatever interest you can soak out of it. This sort of exploration into day to day life in a fantasy world is a rare thing to see in, not only comic books, but media in general, and you pull it off wonderfully.
Still, at the same time we (the readers) can see a slight build up to a more dynamic and faster paced story in the future, and while a part of me will be sad to see us leaving the quiet, day-to-day story of a group of kids fostering themselves to people they don't necessarily feel comfortable with, I am still excited to see how you handle a story more action and twist based. Considering how much I've enjoyed this story so far, I have every faith that you will handle the future of this story just as well, or better, then you have it's chapters past.
I'm afraid I can't give any critique on your artwork, because you know ten times more about artwork then I do myself. Sorry.
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I...have no idea what's happening here. So, of course, there is only 1 solution.
*Goes to reread entire comic*
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I had completely forgotten what was going on! But I've read up on everything, and now it's making sense. Team Bonding! Team oriented clubbing? hhah I'll see I guess.
Just wanted to say, I've enjoyed your comic and that you're a great artist and storyteller! You put yourself down so much, but it is definitely some of the most awesome deviant work I've ever seen. I hope you're enjoying life in wherever you've moved from Japan
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Ahhhh EE. And here I thought I'd never see you again. However, no, I have been blessed with a brand new update. Ohhhh critical fingers...do you even know how to work your critiquing magic anymore?
I really enjoy all of the girls' interactions. Jubilee's "not impressed" face in panel 2 speaks volumes. It's so on par with what she's saying as is Kitty's OVER JUBILANT expression. Honestly, Kitty, really? You wanna JEW yourself out some more by curling your hair? Ohhhhh Kitty. That's also such a Scott-like expression in the first panel. The side smirk. Very Scott-esque. There are some great expressions on this page, even without the use of pupils.
Beware the use of the SAME hand motion, my son. I mean, I'm hardly one to talk as OVER-USING THE SAME HAND POSITION is like my bread and butter. But, I try and teach you NOT TO BE LIKE MEEEEEEEEEE. Jubilee and Scott are making the SAME hand gesture on the same page. It's sorta tricky territory as it's a generally universal gesture, but it's one you default to a lot. Also, coming up with more feminine or masculine--more Scott-like and more Jubilee-like gestures will help separate your characters and make their differences THAT much more noticeable.
Jubilee is suffering from tiny hand syndrome in the fourth panel. Also Kurt's profile in the final panel seems a little animalistic...sloped. I recommend not sloping the forehead back but up. Look at the SHAPE of Kurt's head. See how much MASS is in the FRONT of Kurt's head and not in the back? It just seems that all the weight is in his face and that his skull isn't big enough. This is something I've started to notice in your pieces that when it comes to profiles, the characters have reasonably-proportioned faces and teensy skulls. You don't notice it so much with Kurt's hair, but I've noticed it in other pieces and the same is true here.
I also want to make a SLIGHT NOTE that the starts of the sleeves on the boys' clothes make an awkward angle on their shoulders. The seem line cuts in a little and it makes the sleeves seem a little poofy and the shoulders...awkward. I would suggest not making am indent for the seem, or getting rid of the line all together. Also, on a random note, Scott panel one seems like his body is doing some HEAVY LEANING toward the right side of the panel. I'm not entirely convinced he's centered. I might suggest lining up his features centered with the line on his shirt. JUST A THOUGHT. I think it's generally centered but I couldn't help but feel he was leaning.
It's generally not a bad page! Most of what I said was really nitpicky. I'm so glad to see more EE and I'm excited for EVERYONE ELSE to see what's going on and for me to see all the LAYDAYS in their outfits. OH YEAH! I'm really excited. Whenever you can do more, do!
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hahahahahahah... I MADE HER HANDS BIGGER. I was like "Fuck, thems some TINY ASS HANDS." THATS what they look like ENLARGED. YOU CAN ONLY IMAGINE THE FAIL THAT WAS THIS PAGE'S PENCILS. AHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHA.
Seriously though. Tiny ass hands. MUST NOT REGRESS. o______o
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I still remember what's going on . . .
Well, what the chicks are talking about. Not so much the guys. Beyond Scotts' colour-blindness. Thought by the context I gather it is some manner of sporting event.
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yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay! another update, yes i remember what's going on, glad to see a new panel!
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XD I love it when people do that continuing-each-others-sentances things in film (though , admittedly it can seem quite dirty in the long run ...."team captain" )
cant wait to see everyone strut their respective stuff
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Great artwork, I'm still trying to master the Evolution style myself but this actually looks canon. I think I have a fague idea of what the plot was from reading the other pages a few months ago.
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Yeah I had to go back and read the last five pages...Keep going!
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On the second story, yeah ^_^;;
To be fair, any guy crazy enough to look in on THAT room would get fireworks, lava, an angry werewolf, and a girl who can embed their boybits inside their body cavity thrown at them.
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oh, that goes without saying, lol!
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Well I just started reading the comic yesterday so I'm happy of the page ^-^ I hope you won't do a break like that again cuz I alsolutely love your great comic! Please don't leave us!
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