HOME | DD

bleeding4u — Falling through
Published: 2004-01-19 16:16:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 178; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 4
Redirect to original
Description falling through my pictographic memory
making stops on important dates
only to realize they all included you
wonderful
star lit nights with you
beautiful
long days spent with you
then the long forgotten times when you broke my heart
awful
lonely nights without you
extrenuous
fights to tell myself i dont love you
but then it all went away
because i went away
faded and broken
with only a memory of love to save me
Related content
Comments: 10

XxNotWorthSavingxX [2004-01-21 01:37:02 +0000 UTC]

very beautiful,work you really show the feeling in mine i cant show my feeling sounds stupid when i do, very nice work, almost did make me want to cry, brought back those horrible memories

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

bleeding4u In reply to XxNotWorthSavingxX [2004-01-21 04:50:23 +0000 UTC]

oh im sorry.

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

snow-munkiie63 [2004-01-20 05:06:46 +0000 UTC]

o that's beautiful, i can relate to this also. yep. good.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

bleeding4u In reply to snow-munkiie63 [2004-01-21 04:48:57 +0000 UTC]

thanx

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

darkwonder [2004-01-20 04:03:03 +0000 UTC]

Wow...this just made me cry...I can relate SO much and it hurts....DAMN IT MUST BE GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Anyways....Im faving this...

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

bleeding4u In reply to darkwonder [2004-01-21 04:47:56 +0000 UTC]

thanx

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

TraptInMyDespair [2004-01-19 22:19:54 +0000 UTC]

dude this is rilly kool!

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

bleeding4u In reply to TraptInMyDespair [2004-01-19 23:29:27 +0000 UTC]

thanx

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

dare2bdifrent228 [2004-01-19 17:46:15 +0000 UTC]

Hmm....nice writing...now have to sit and think about some cynical thing to say about the ideas behind it....I'll have to get back to you on that. Anyways, good job.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

bleeding4u In reply to dare2bdifrent228 [2004-01-19 22:01:29 +0000 UTC]

umm thanx i think

👍: 0 ⏩: 0