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From technical point of view, it is obvious you're amazingly skilful, and your work is very elaborated. But from theoretical point of view I would suggest just a few things.
The light is soft and beautifully placed increasing her magic look, nonetheless, it seems to lack some accent. Meaning, there should be some 'place of drama' made only with light (and I can see you definitely can do that) to be a counterweight to all those wonderful details of the armor.
Sword design is simple and functional, which is great in making balance of front and background but it should be a bit more pointed out to the viewer, so we can easily see it's few centimeters in front of her. That's simple with adding darker shadow and more definition to lines.
That brings me to my last observation, hair lacks definition and temper, precisely - line. Line is infinite medium of expression, often neglected, especially in painting. I would like you to consider this option, to involve more line in such work (but not too much of it).
I may not be much of a painter but I do see this things and I speak based on study of art theory and history.
Once again, I must say this is one breathtaking work. I felt instantly inspired to write this critique, that's not often at all and I thank you for that!
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Cheers!
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the armor is stunning, as is the rest of the piece. fabulous work
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THanks so much^@^
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From technical point of view, it is obvious you're amazingly skilful, and your work is very elaborated. But from theoretical point of view I would suggest just a few things.
The light is soft and beautifully placed increasing her magic look, nonetheless, it seems to lack some accent. Meaning, there should be some 'place of drama' made only with light (and I can see you definitely can do that) to be a counterweight to all those wonderful details of the armor.
Sword design is simple and functional, which is great in making balance of front and background but it should be a bit more pointed out to the viewer, so we can easily see it's few centimeters in front of her. That's simple with adding darker shadow and more definition to lines.
That brings me to my last observation, hair lacks definition and temper, precisely - line. Line is infinite medium of expression, often neglected, especially in painting. I would like you to consider this option, to involve more line in such work (but not too much of it).
I may not be much of a painter but I do see this things and I speak based on study of art theory and history.
Once again, I must say this is one breathtaking work. I felt instantly inspired to write this critique, that's not often at all and I thank you for that!
Have a great and creative life!
Cheers!
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Wow, that's a detail critiques^^, Thanks so much, Im so happy. Hope u always have a happy life ^^
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I Like it! That sword looks heavy as hell, but wickedly sharp and steely!
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Thanks for your like^^
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Wonderful lighting: it makes her face very captivating. The details of her armour are very well made. On the whole, I think that the outcome is very good. In particular, the "blurred" effect makes the whole picture much more realistic.
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Thanks somuch for a detail comment. I like it^^
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You are welcome!
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Wow, this is really good 
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Wow! The detals in that armor and the lightning on it *,*
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Haha, How are you. One more month, the new year will come^^, Do you have holiday?
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I love the bits of blue and violet you dotted around her armor and sword.
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THanks, blue and violet are my favourite^^
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She's so beautyful! I love her eyes! And the nose looks cool, it gives her something special. Her armor is awesome!
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