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dorashouldprint [2013-12-21 19:32:17 +0000 UTC]
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From technical point of view, it is obvious you're amazingly skilful, and your work is very elaborated. But from theoretical point of view I would suggest just a few things.
The light is soft and beautifully placed increasing her magic look, nonetheless, it seems to lack some accent. Meaning, there should be some 'place of drama' made only with light (and I can see you definitely can do that) to be a counterweight to all those wonderful details of the armor.
Sword design is simple and functional, which is great in making balance of front and background but it should be a bit more pointed out to the viewer, so we can easily see it's few centimeters in front of her. That's simple with adding darker shadow and more definition to lines.
That brings me to my last observation, hair lacks definition and temper, precisely - line. Line is infinite medium of expression, often neglected, especially in painting. I would like you to consider this option, to involve more line in such work (but not too much of it).
I may not be much of a painter but I do see this things and I speak based on study of art theory and history.
Once again, I must say this is one breathtaking work. I felt instantly inspired to write this critique, that's not often at all and I thank you for that!
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Cheers!
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ArtbroJohn [2014-10-13 09:36:39 +0000 UTC]
Great work!
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madsketchbook [2014-03-15 14:28:50 +0000 UTC]
the armor is stunning, as is the rest of the piece. fabulous work
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clc1997 [2014-03-02 14:56:21 +0000 UTC]
beautiful!
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bloodyman88 In reply to clc1997 [2014-03-06 05:51:22 +0000 UTC]
Thanks so much^^
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dorashouldprint [2013-12-21 19:31:36 +0000 UTC]
From technical point of view, it is obvious you're amazingly skilful, and your work is very elaborated. But from theoretical point of view I would suggest just a few things.
The light is soft and beautifully placed increasing her magic look, nonetheless, it seems to lack some accent. Meaning, there should be some 'place of drama' made only with light (and I can see you definitely can do that) to be a counterweight to all those wonderful details of the armor.
Sword design is simple and functional, which is great in making balance of front and background but it should be a bit more pointed out to the viewer, so we can easily see it's few centimeters in front of her. That's simple with adding darker shadow and more definition to lines.
That brings me to my last observation, hair lacks definition and temper, precisely - line. Line is infinite medium of expression, often neglected, especially in painting. I would like you to consider this option, to involve more line in such work (but not too much of it).
I may not be much of a painter but I do see this things and I speak based on study of art theory and history.
Once again, I must say this is one breathtaking work. I felt instantly inspired to write this critique, that's not often at all and I thank you for that!
Have a great and creative life!
Cheers!
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bloodyman88 In reply to dorashouldprint [2014-03-06 05:51:16 +0000 UTC]
Wow, that's a detail critiques^^, Thanks so much, Im so happy. Hope u always have a happy life ^^
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MrAkton [2013-12-21 11:59:00 +0000 UTC]
Reminds me more of a sorta cleric-warrior
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YenniferDark [2013-12-21 10:10:33 +0000 UTC]
Good armor)
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Lomeloke [2013-12-20 23:24:13 +0000 UTC]
wonderful job!
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I-Am-Madbat [2013-11-24 04:13:56 +0000 UTC]
I Like it! That sword looks heavy as hell, but wickedly sharp and steely!
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Darkendrama [2013-11-17 16:58:30 +0000 UTC]
WOW!!! Ā Ā Ā
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bloodyman88 In reply to SpiritsSeeker [2013-11-19 09:43:17 +0000 UTC]
Thanks somuch for a detail comment. I like it^^
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Jacob-Cross [2013-11-16 09:01:35 +0000 UTC]
Nice
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Rhythm-Wily [2013-11-16 03:41:46 +0000 UTC]
That armor and sword looks amazing~!
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Halowing [2013-11-16 01:31:39 +0000 UTC]
Beautiful~
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MonstersHunter [2013-11-15 19:32:03 +0000 UTC]
Wow! The detals in that armor and the lightning on it *,*
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bloodyman88 In reply to MonstersHunter [2013-11-19 09:44:28 +0000 UTC]
Haha, How are you. One more month, the new year will come^^, Do you have holiday?
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satchelwinn [2013-11-15 19:16:02 +0000 UTC]
I love the bits of blue and violet you dotted around her armor and sword.
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bloodyman88 In reply to satchelwinn [2013-11-19 09:45:29 +0000 UTC]
THanks, blue and violet are my favourite^^
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HandsCraft [2013-11-15 17:58:00 +0000 UTC]
She's so beautyful! I love her eyes! And the nose looks cool, it gives her something special. Her armor is awesome!
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