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Another page after the longest hiatus.

This is the page a nearly scrapped for mistakes on lineart mostly pertaining to the panel lines. You can see the faint edges of the second panel to the left... At first when I took an ink marker to a ruler to draw the line, the ink spread out underneath the ruler! So I used a smaller pen for the next panel lines and one in the bottom left corner of the third panel went wonky too. It was that bad but I was already frustrated with the mistake and just gave up for a while.
Today, I bought this white gel markers to try to fix it but the gel sort of mixed with the black ink and made this reddish color. So I tried to fix that with a redder background on the second panel and I thought that works since Adrian's pretty mad and the color is parallel to Feng's colors. And then in the third panel, I used the gel again and it made that reddish color again but the orangey grass covered it up okay I think.

I hate that my scanner cuts off a good quarter of the page and you can see the rest of Adrian's legs. Awkward cutting off of a character or figure is starting to bug me because it would bug my previous art teacher. He said it showed laziness or inability to draw a figure. Say I couldn't draw Adrian's hooves so I just cut them out of the image entirely. (I didn't. They're still there in real life). It just sucks because he has a pretty okay pose.

Also, I think the rain clouds look more like smoke, what do you think?

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Description
Another page after the longest hiatus.

This is the page a nearly scrapped for mistakes on lineart mostly pertaining to the panel lines. You can see the faint edges of the second panel to the left... At first when I took an ink marker to a ruler to draw the line, the ink spread out underneath the ruler! So I used a smaller pen for the next panel lines and one in the bottom left corner of the third panel went wonky too. It was that bad but I was already frustrated with the mistake and just gave up for a while.
Today, I bought this white gel markers to try to fix it but the gel sort of mixed with the black ink and made this reddish color. So I tried to fix that with a redder background on the second panel and I thought that works since Adrian's pretty mad and the color is parallel to Feng's colors. And then in the third panel, I used the gel again and it made that reddish color again but the orangey grass covered it up okay I think.

I hate that my scanner cuts off a good quarter of the page and you can see the rest of Adrian's legs. Awkward cutting off of a character or figure is starting to bug me because it would bug my previous art teacher. He said it showed laziness or inability to draw a figure. Say I couldn't draw Adrian's hooves so I just cut them out of the image entirely. (I didn't. They're still there in real life). It just sucks because he has a pretty okay pose.

Also, I think the rain clouds look more like smoke, what do you think?

Page 171: blu-blood.deviantart.com/art/B…

Page 173: Under Construction...