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Blue-Milk95 — Flowers in the room
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Published: 2016-05-15 22:23:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 1118; Favourites: 92; Downloads: 0
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EDIT: Since many people have been commenting and helping me see the faults (and I know there's still a lot XD ) I made some little changes. :>I liked how it turned out
but I know there's a lot to improve too >.> Sometimes its hard to realize the errors, even if its obvious to others... so if anyone want to help me improve, feel free to comment or send a critique, Ill be really happy to read it ^^
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This painting, 'Flowers in the room', gives me a Japanese feeling, and that is what you were aiming to portray. It makes me feel calm and relaxed. It makes me go... ahhhh...
You have showed me your excellent skill in lighting, because it seems as if you know exactly where to put the light shades for the soft yellow glow, but maybe, if you made it a bit stronger, it would give off more emotion. The fabric in front of the woman's knees is somewhat unusually bright, even in the shadows, which perplexes me. The colors go well together, and gives me a nice feeling, because the cyan and red-orange are on opposite sides of the color wheel, and complements each other. I like that you used not-too-bold colors, because that also calms the image. The sketchy lines make it not too definite, which illustrates complete tranquility. You are amazing at using such techniques to tell the audience what they should feel like, and what their mood should be when they look at the drawing. I have seen some digital drawings that have a similar idea to yours, but you have depicted it better than others I have seen.
The painting is overall drawn very well. I loved all aspects of it, although an improvement on shading would make it better.
<3 Carry on doing art!
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Thank you so much!
I really appreciate the critique. You made me see all the pointed faults that somehow seemed invisible to me before. Also, the analysis of the piece is amazing! I'm happy to know that people like you also see my works and think how it was made.
It's a honor to have such an improving critique! <3
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<3 Thank you! This is actually my first critique, so I looked at a bunch of other critiques to see what was the best way to write them.
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This is very well done! The soft lighting and her gentle expression really make a tranquil atmosphere. ^^ I only have a few little suggestions; I would move her mouth a little further from the edge of her face, because it makes her seem a bit like she's twisting her lips, (if that makes sense). You could also lower her right eye, (viewer's left,) a fraction. You have a lovely style! ^^
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Thank you!
I'll change her eyes, its really bothering me now XD
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You're welcome!
Sorry, I didn't mean for it to bother you! ^^
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A expressão facial da gueixa,o kimono e o shamisen estão bem feitos!A escolha das cores também me parece correta. Faltam as cordas do instrumento e talvez um arranjo floral no aposento ou no traje da garota para justificar o título,mas isso não diminui a beleza do trabalho.
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Realmente, tem vários detalhes que ficaram mal resolvidos (as cordas por exemplo), eu preciso voltar nese desenho para corrigir esses erros XD
Muito obrigada!
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De nada!A propósito,nessa hora,é bom lembrar da Ikebana,arte japonesa dos arranjos florais.Eis alguns exemplos que talvez lhe sejam úteis s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/2… ; s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/2… ; floreriaangelous.mex.tl/images… www.abelaflores.com.br/produto… www.peixotoplanejados.com.br/w…
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De nada! Pelo jeito,parece que você gostou das imagens que eu lhe forneci.
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