((I drew my OC Leon again glaring for practice cause next time I'm drawinghim with Scourge and no I'm not shipping him with anyone just yet, anyway I leaveit up to you guys who he's glaring at.))((Leon's bio: xever-blue-zonecopx.deviantart… ))((BTW guys umm....*Sighs* I may regret asking this but....here it goes, kindly giveconstructive criticism to my OC here, BTW just to be clear I want to hear if there areany issues with the character and not just say the first thing that randomly is in yourmind like "DURRRR Is Shitty Recolour~!!!1" that way I know what to improve, there isa HUGE difference between critique and purposely being insulting so kindly rememberthat. Now you guys can go ahead and criticize my OC through messages since I haveno premium and can't open the critique widget so I apologize for that but anywaygo for it and lemme hear what I can improve on my OC here, but please don't makeme regret asking this from the people out there by starting a fuss for no reason at all okay? Thanks.))Leon the Hedgehog (c) by Me
RachelTheZoneCop [2014-09-18 20:00:36 +0000 UTC]
Critique: ~~~~~~First of all, nice drawing and the shading looks awesome as well :3After looking well at Leon's design and reading his bio, I have to say that hes is truly a badass hedgehog for sure! Although SOME *cough..haters* might say that he's another re-color, I say that his design was very well done and was creative, and don't forget his interesting biography! c:But might I suggest a few thingies for Leon?If yes: ===== I suggest drawing something on his jacket, like a flaming skull or something badass since Leon is Scourge's apprentice. Another thing I might suggest is coloring one of his pupils in blue and the other in red since Leon has the power to control the flames and has a split personality (sometimes evil and sometimes kind to animals) *or something like that* I also suggest adding a few scars on his body *arm,ear, leg* but not on his belly since he was in a lot of fights with is father and brothers. *Oh and if you add a scar on Leon's belly, they will start shouting that he's a Scourge re-color* Last but not least, I suggest adding a bit more design to Leon's shoes c;In the end I must say that Leon is an interesting hedgehog for sure and I can't wait to know how he would react when he meets Zonic Hope this *long and boring* critique helps :3
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Blue-Zoner In reply to RachelTheZoneCop [2014-09-24 08:31:50 +0000 UTC]
((Thank you so much for the critique, hmmm I'll try to see what I can do on the next drawing as a final decision for his design.))
RachelTheZoneCop In reply to Blue-Zoner [2014-09-24 14:48:53 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome buddy c:
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GamertheHedgehog [2014-09-18 12:22:07 +0000 UTC]
looks awesome
TheRepeatingOfPast [2014-09-18 10:19:41 +0000 UTC]
impressive zonic