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Bluejayartist — Jay's Path pg. 85
Published: 2015-03-13 01:52:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 2527; Favourites: 33; Downloads: 0
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The end panel is so lazy sorry(also this is a really short chapter wow)Related content
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Ethan: hoe don't do it
Iris: we're taking you to our camp
Ethan: oh my god
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At first, I honestly hated your style and loved your rants mainly. With the way it is now it's very adorable. I'm not sure if you wanted it that way or not but that's just how I see it now compared to forever ago, and as of now, I'm honored to critique it.
I really like how you changed the style of the noses on the cats in this comic and your other art. It looks a bit more realistic and it gives more of a varied style of each cat.
What I think you need to work on is making the ears smaller, mainly when they are at the side. Cats do have a forehead, and I think it'd be nice if you showed more of that. Please don't think I'm being an annoying commenter, I'm just trying to make an artist who has great potential and motive to draw get to fulfill that potential.
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Its up to you. Right now its sinking
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NUUUU!!!!! AGAIN, CLIFF HANGER! STAHP IT! YOU'S KILLIN' ME!
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Woop
Things are getting serious now
I̶ ̶d̶o̶n̶'̶t̶ ̶w̶a̶n̶t̶ ̶t̶o̶ ̶s̶o̶u̶n̶d̶ ̶l̶i̶k̶e̶ ̶a̶ ̶c̶o̶m̶p̶l̶a̶i̶n̶i̶n̶g̶ ̶i̶d̶i̶o̶t̶,̶ ̶b̶u̶t̶ ̶y̶o̶u̶ ̶c̶o̶u̶l̶d̶ ̶a̶d̶d̶ ̶m̶o̶r̶e̶ ̶s̶p̶a̶c̶e̶ ̶b̶e̶t̶w̶e̶e̶n̶ ̶t̶h̶e̶ ̶e̶y̶e̶s̶ ̶t̶o̶ ̶m̶a̶k̶e̶ ̶i̶t̶ ̶l̶o̶o̶k̶ ̶b̶e̶t̶t̶e̶r̶
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i dun like ur new nose style though
i preferred the old one you had
but that's just me
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aight so i was lookin at iris' shot before he was with the black and white cat with amber eyes and i was looking at iris like "what the fuck" and then i noticed the black and it took me a while to process
just look at the white and pink for nightmares
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I get a feeling she's gonna see either Mark or Crimcram
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crimcram. Made me laugh XD
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MarkyMoo and CrimCram
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Youtuber..? Call me stupid I only know who Markiplier is out of those two..
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i didn't mean it to be Markiplier XD
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gahhh im loosin my marbles. I forget names easily.. THATS WHY ITS HARD FOR ME TO WRITE A STORY <_> rawr.. I need to be taken off of soda.
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meh.. I just figured out my summer is going to be awful ._.
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I love how the black cat has to SAY "Don't answer that". It's like they do that all the time. "Where's the money?!" "In the drawer" "Where's the combination?" "Here!" XD
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