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Published: 2005-01-30 08:56:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 87; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 3
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I lay in bedcounting the tears
that will not come.
The darkness surrounds
but is too bright,
the moment passed
the watery sight.
Tears abound
do not roll
i need to feel
them tickle my face.
I can't bring back
the way i felt
i can't let loose
the anguish inside.
Anger swoops in
replaces negative feelings
a protection mechanism i can't shut down.
I need to drown -
not to breathe -
to die the death
my heart longs for
the end i've craved
since the first tears
escaped my eyes.
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Comments: 3
Cool. Nice how you've got three or four words to a line, that makes the poem easier to read and makes it a lot more powerful with its expressions.
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thank you.
that's just how it was coming to me. My poetry often dictates itself - when i write, the flow of it is very important, i don't want things to become too repetitive or stagnant.
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You managed that very well. It's very good, really reflects this flow of thoughts just passing through your mind.
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